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This memo examines the strengths and weaknesses of my presentation on March 19, 2010. In addition, the memo discusses my goals for improvement in future presentations as well as a review of Aly Sherali’s presentation. Presentation Strengths My organization, voice, and passion were all strong points of my presentation. This allowed me to effectively engage my audience and convey my content in an efficient and logical way. Organization Tim Koegel, author of The Exceptional Presenter, explains that there are two essential facets of organizing a presentation: developing a structure that allows you to frame your objective and cover your material smoothly, and looking organized to your audience (Koegel, 31-32). I structured my slides and content in a manner that made the goal of my presentation clear and allowed me to cover the information in a smooth, logical manner. I also continually attempted to reengage my audience with key words and examples in my presentation. The mind of an audience member is constantly darting in multiple directions (Koegel, 33). My key words and personal examples gave the audience a reason to refocus on what I was saying. I was also successful in following the five components of a great presentation outlined by Koegel. I began with a purpose when I explained, “I am here to answer the question ‘What in the world is Google Wave?’” I followed this with an objective statement by explaining my agenda. The body of my presentation thoroughly explained the situation by examining what Google Wave is and what it can do. I followed this closely with the benefits the product can offer. Lastly, I ended with a next step: encouraging my audience to try the product (Koegel, 34-38). Including these components in my pre... ... middle of paper ... ... points he was making. • Aly went out of his way to share his eye contact with everyone in the room. He continually looked from side to side, engaging the entire audience. • Aly’s tone was conversational and professional. • Aly’s pace was steady and measured. He paused to accent important points and finished in an appropriate amount of time. • Aly followed a logical structure, guiding the audience through his main points and ending with an effective wrap up of the information he covered. Conclusion After reviewing my presentation and examining The Exceptional Presenter by Tim Koegel, as well as Aly Sherali’s presentation, I have identified several areas of improvement for my presentation skills and established goals for my next presentation. If you have any feedback or additional comments you would like to share, please contact me at mwesson@tulane.edu

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