Example Of A Personal Statement For Attending College

Personal Statement

Growing up in East Los Angeles, a low-income Latino community, it seemed like there was no paved road to a career; the only way to make a living was through physical labor. In a community where every adult male owns a pair of work boots, I grew up hearing my father and neighbors start up their trucks at dawn and not be heard again until they returned at dark, their bodies covered with dirt and dust.

In my community, education is not the priority for many; school is a place to keep your kids out of trouble and high school is not a stepping-stone to college, but rather the end of your education. Thankfully, my parents, who only went as far as middle school in Mexico, have taught my brothers and me that an education will lead to a better life. It is my family who encourages me to pursue my dream of attending college. Although my parents can’t offer homework help or educational advice, they are always giving me their support, whether it is by checking in on me during a late night of homework or leaving notes of encouragement inside my textbook for me to find, they are by my side.

My two older brothers are accomplishing the dream my parents have for us.

They are currently attending College and are my role models; their example and support motivate me. The late night phone calls, Skype visits, and the never-ending group chats with my brothers offers a break and helps me get through any difficult days. Whether we talk politics, boxing, or reminisce about our childhood memories, we know that we always have each other for support. They encouraged me to take advanced courses, take part in extracurricular activities, and volunteer in my community. Most importantly, they showed me it is possible for a boy from East Los Angeles to attend

college.
Growing up, I was always eager to go to school. It was not only because it was a place to see my friends, but also for the information I learned, like how ants live, how trains work, and how mountains are formed. As I grew, my interests expanded, especially to history. I learned that understanding the past allows for better understanding the present. I became interested in current world affairs and politics, cultures and religions, justice, and the role laws and government play in society.
Opportunity fuels my life and education. I am a student who takes advantage of all possibilities to develop knowledge. One who reviews incorrect answers on an exam and reexamines himself to learn from his mistakes. One who attended Boys State to gain valuable experience in his passion and is a part of programs like College Match to help achieve his goals. In addition, opportunities from Students Run LA allowed me experience running two marathons and have taught me my greatest lesson, that I have the persistence to achieve any goal I may have.
I aim for a future where I wake up enthusiastic for a new day, where I work because of the passion for what I do, not solely for the financial necessity. One where I am able to live the dreams I have had since childhood. Although the atmosphere in my community does not offer the greatest support for my dreams, I am proud to be from East Los Angeles. I want to demonstrate that East LA is not only a gang filled community, but a community filled with hard workers and stable families. I want a future where I will be able to make a positive impact on my community, work to improve the lives of others, and inspire kids to follow their dreams.