Grabber Bullying Thesis Statement

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The introduction gave an appreciable background information of the topic, in terms of defining terms. However, the grabber wasn’t completely effective in catching the reader’s attention. The writer could have used a shocking statistical fact like the one stated in paragraph 2 rather than simply defining the term bullying. Furthermore, a transition sentence is needed to link the grabber to the thesis statement. The grabber defines bullying then specifically cyberbullying; the thesis, however, spoke about cyberbullying in today’s society among teenagers. A sentence connecting Teenagers in today’s society to cyberbullying would have been useful before the thesis statement. The thesis statement is a single declarative sentence that states the topic

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