Summary Of Promise Of Gold By Jose Olivarez

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In his book Promises of Gold, Jose Olivarez showcases the way he’d ignore all the problems and issues the world has, emphasizing how often we overlook life. Olivarez is the son of migrants and also the author of Citizen Illegal. Olivarez’s vision was to push the idea that a promise is an attempt that can be broken. Through these poems, we find his resolution to the struggles of the world we live in, in the forms of loving, learning, and growing. Olivarez demonstrates his reflection of the world and writes about the importance of the struggle that comes with being ignorant. Through his poetry, José Olivarez explores the nature of ignorance and knowledge, suggesting that while the pursuit of understanding can lead to defeat, as seen in “Loyalty,” …show more content…

This is significant because it reminds others to put in perspective their own actions and compare them to the poem. If you’re doing the same, it may be that you aren’t keeping the promise you made to yourself, and you should instead be consistent, do the small actions that do help, and avoid the lies we tell ourselves. In his poem “All the Names We Say Because We Don’t Say Love," Olivarez becomes more knowledgeable and emphasizes that being clueless is okay. For example, all the lines contain one word, like a list, “motherfucker /ugly / bald-headed ass / ugly / ugly ass” (Olivarez 77). "Motherfucker" is literally a vulgar word, but it also has a more sentimental association with being close to another person, something only the relationship can understand. These words are the same as “homie / bro / fam / my guy / my brother” (Olivarez 77), words that also deliver endearment when exchanged with another person who is close. These are the kinds of issues we have in the world when a person is ignorant enough to assume before knowing the …show more content…

We become so accustomed to the same routine that we overlook our surroundings and lack appreciation for the moment. Neglecting our consciousness leads to a struggle to comprehend, conveniently trapping our mind in an unchanging state. Jose Olivarez captured the ignorance we humans experience in the poems listed previously. Reading Promises of Gold gave me direction to write about life using some of the techniques found in his poems, such as anaphora and imagery. The poems themselves are supposed to convey the message that being lost in a cycle is difficult to break out of, and that's okay because it takes time. To unpack my poems, we must look at the first poem, "Unchanging," which I attempted to write about my daily routine. I wake up from my sleep, reach for some coffee to get the momentum going, feeling like I can get something done for the day until I know it’s just going to be another unproductive day. Continuing with my day, I see the workload I have on my computer, and looking at it just makes me want to go to bed so I can put it off for the next day. The original poem that inspired me to write this one is from Olivarez, “Loyalty” (Olivarez 68). This poem resonated with me because I believe I am the definition of unloyal, which is contrary to the title. Going against your own words is what I connect with. I'm unaware of my actions until I’m in shambles, just so I

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