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Growing up, it was hard to find time to spend as a family. My mom worked two full time jobs in a span of twenty four hours. Her first job consisted of working in a lab where they made packaging solutions, then at night she worked as a bartender. My brother and I would see her for about three hours until we would have to settle in with another babysitter. I wasn’t really aware of what was going on until my brother and I were enrolled into school. Everyday we would walk to school it was hard to spark a conversation with him because he had a problem that no one knew about. And little did I know that I also needed help developing greater english skills, so my teacher decided that I come in an hour earlier each day to get the extra help. Around the time that I started attending these classes my brother moved onto middle school and I began to walk alone. It wasn’t a problem until one day someone started chasing me and lucky enough a cop stopped me to ask me about the situation. …show more content…
As I grew older, the ‘“problem” with my brother progressed.
He had anger management issues due to the frustration surrounding him. My mom, having no clue as to what to do, approached a low-income counselor who helped us slowly piece back together the miscommunication in the family. So much attention was put onto my brother that I felt as if I was doing everything alone. My cousin who would pick me up from school everyday since the incident of someone chasing me was the only person who would ask me “What did you learn today?”. At first, I would respond with “nothing” or “I forgot” because it was such an awkward thing for a child whose focus was not in school but rather wondering when I would see my mom. Overtime, I would repeat this question to myself in class or at school that way I would have something to talk about on my way home. Things stayed like this for quite some time until the day my mom lost her
job. After ten years of working two full time jobs, my mom left her bartender job to focus on her main job which was packaging solutions. Now, at this point she was very comfortable in her job, but nobody expected the worst. An undocumented, high school graduate with now three children had lost her only job. The day I found out I did not want to go home from school because I did not want to encounter another mishap. I got involved in competitive swimming at my high school and I joined MESA (Math Engineering Science Achievement)/SHPE Jr. (Society of Hispanic Professional Engineers Jr.) because I had a teacher who believed in me and saw beyond every hour I spent in her class. Above all, I couldn’t believe I was praised for being good in math. My freshman year of highschool I saw it difficult to engage into such a club that was fairly new to my recognition, so I began to push it aside because of a statement my MESA advisor once told me, she said “you won’t win Kimberly.” I was in such emotional distress that I began to reflect on everything I was doing wrong just so I can prove to her that everything I did was only to get better. I began attending weekly meetings, saturday sessions, and I even ran for a board position. After my freshman year, Embry-Riddle University gave me the opportunity to fly out to Arizona and take a computer science/engineering class which has inspired me since to continue school after college. Now, I am currently a junior and I stand as the president of SHPE Jr. at Santa Teresa High School.
I have always grown up around the influence of hard work. My mother and father’s life together began off to a rough start. My mother got pregnant at the age of 20 with my brother. Her family was not very supportive of it; therefore, she was on her own. She used to tell me about how she would sit and cry in a one bedroom apartment that she lived in with my brother wondering what she was going to do. Although she had to grow up faster than she
They expected so much from him, he was the one to go to college and major in medicine or engineering. To get this great job that made good money, and to support the whole family. He was my parent's American dream, while my little sister and I we're along for the ride. As a kid I thought that since they expected that from him, I had to do to the same. I started to develop a mentality that education wasn't for me, but for my family to become successful. I fail to realize that what my parents were doing to my older brother was wrong. That they were going to use him to live the life they couldn't have. I didn't realize the stress they put him through and that because of that stress he was slowly becoming depressed. I was so stuck in this world that their expectations we're supposed to be mine. After my brother graduated high school, I started to doubt the mentality I developed after he had enough and left. But because I didn't want to disappoint my parents like my brother did, I just pushed the issue
However, I moved to Toronto alone when I was 12 for the better education system. Ever since then, I was raised by my aunt's family. Gong back to my early childhood, both of my parents practiced authoritative parenting style. They have always been loving and caring, yet they never spoiled me to a point where I could not appreciate their love and care. Coming from Korea’s competitive and strict education system, I witnessed many of my friends suffering from their parents’ high academic expectations already at the age of 12 or even before then. However, my parents never pressured me with school and their priorities were always the subjects and activities I enjoyed. Although, they still ensured that I was doing reasonably well in my less preferred classes, they never forced me to spend extra hours or sent me to numerous outside-of-school programs for such courses. When English became my favourite subject, they provided me with english tutors and eventually sent me to Canada. When I finally moved to Canada, my aunt’s family also practiced authoritative parenting style. My aunt and uncle already had two adult sons and were experienced enough to raise me in a good environment. They were a little stressed/worried about disciplining me at first—disciplining someone else’s child can be difficult—they eventually managed to do so by discussing it with my parents. Both my parents, and my aunt’s family did not alter their
A couple of weeks ago, the class was assigned a personal narrative essay and the prompt was to tell an interesting story of a specific experience that changed how you acted, thought, or felt. To be honest, I was awfully excited to write this essay because talking about myself is the easiest thing to write about sometimes. However, deciding what experience to talk about was challenging because I have already experienced so much in my seventeen years of being alive from dislocating my hip when I was three, to seeing my grandfather die in front of my eyes, from almost tripping off of the trail on the Grand Canyon, to meeting band members at an airport. Writing this essay brought me many challenges, I did not know what topic to choose, I had no
Personal narratives allow you to share your life with others and vicariously experience the things that happen around you. Your job as a writer is to put the reader in the midst of the action letting him or her live through an experience. Although a great deal of writing has a thesis, stories are different. A good story creates a dramatic effect, makes us laugh, gives us pleasurable fright, and/or gets us on the edge of our seats. A story has done its job if we can say, "Yes, that captures what living with my father feels like," or "Yes, that’s what being cut from the football team felt like."
Today many people undergo challenges in their lives and they can either let it stop them or push forward. As the eldest child of a single mother, one huge adversity I had faced growing up would be helping my mother with my two younger brothers. My parents divorced when I was six years old and my father being in the military was deployed around the world. I don’t think not having my father active in my life put me at a disadvantage but there were times where things would’ve been easier if he were there. My mother wasn’t able to work most of the time because she had to watch my younger brothers. Therefore, we are considered a low-income family. Throughout my life, I had to learn how to prioritize and balance my education with home life. As I
Therefore, I was very dependent on my family and friends. Anytime someone new tried to talk to me, I could always count on at least one of my sisters, to be standing right by my side, answering any question they threw at me. One of the things that scared me the most about public school was the number of hours I would be away from my family, after all, they were my interpreters and protectors. After the first few weeks, when everything started to settle down, that’s when I realized “I can do this.” The whole communication and conversation was not as horrible as I imagined it to be. In fact, people were really quite pleasant to me, being the “new girl” and all. I started to make list, which may not seem to be a big deal, but it was a big step for me. Since, previously, I thought that list were just something mothers made for groceries, or the elderly made due their forgetfulness. I was wrong. I came to realize, that it was an independency thing, not an age or gender thing. They had so much responsibilities that they had to write them all down, in order to remember them
My family has many traditions but one comes to mind every time. We always meet during spring break with my second cousins Reed and Owen, and my aunt Vicky and uncle Dick. We came over to my aunt and uncle’s house in Roanoke, Il. We got there and we thought it would be a normal family meeting time.
Growing up school wasn’t easy for me either, I tended to be tormented for how reserved I was towards other people and would always keep to myself. It was no different at home, you see my brothers loved to spend time with each other, but would never want to include me, they’d go out of their way to bully, torment, and since my mother was never really home till about midnight occasionally even abuse me. So as you can imagine I grew up isolated with a constantly working mother who was completely oblivious to everything that occurred at home and two brothers who genuinely resented me for it believing it was my fault mother was always gone… There were times when I’d try to read my problems away, but even in my land of books… I’d get to see mothers tucking their children to sleep, rocking their baby to sleep, and sometimes kissing their little boy goodnight; but it never really worked due to the fact that I just happened to remind myself about how I was destined to be the rejected outcast amongst any group I happen to find myself in. At age seven my mother had me sent to a neurologist because she would frequently catch me rocking myself to sleep and insisted something was wrong with
I was born on October 3, 2000 in Salinas, California. I was born to wonderful immigrant parents who continue to work hard in order for me to have an awesome life. I have three fabulous sisters that I love and sometimes hate. When I was young, I was not able to explore the world outside of East Salinas. Both of my parents were scared to go out of Salinas and they also didn’t have enough time since they had to work in strenuous jobs. I instead created my own world in my backyard with my pets and homemade swing. In my backyard I had chicks and chickens, ducks, a peacock, and a pup named Cassandra. My swing was just a thick lazo that hung over a tree branch; I used a sweater so that I wouldn’t feel the pressure of the lazo when I sat.
For my International Studies Internship, I spent from September-December at the Office of Education Abroad at the University of North Carolina at Charlotte. During my duration at the internship my official position was the role of Public Relations and Student Outreach. My advisor for this job was Beth Lorenz who is one of the main advisors of Education Abroad at UNCC. I was very excited at the prospect of working at this office when I saw the flyer advertising the position. As someone who had just retuned from my own education abroad trip that summer, I was energetic and passionate to encourage other students to partake in something that had been such a huge influence on me. Every week my average schedule was about 10 hours, however I often worked over these required 10 hours in order to reach the hours required to receive a 3-hour International studies course credit.
While in school, Mom didn’t have it to easy. Not only did she raise a daughter and take care of a husband, she had to deal with numerous setbacks. These included such things as my father suffering a heart attack and going on to have a triple by-pass, she herself went through an emergency surgery, which sat her a semester behind, and her father also suffered a heart attack. Mom not only dealt with these setbacks but she had the everyday task of things like cooking dinner, cleaning the house and raising a family. I don’t know how she managed it all, but somehow she did.
Throughout my life, I have always faced setbacks of numerous calibers, but none were as major as the predicament I was put into in early March 2017. It all started around 10:00 P.M. when my friends and I wanted to go get food at our local Wendys. Usually, my friend Justin is a very safe driver, but this time was different. Believing the car coming towards us was going to stop because we were turning into a drive-thru and the street we were turning into had a red light, he began to turn onto the street that led to the drive-thru. To Justin’s surprise, the car did not stop and flew right into the front of our car on the passenger side; which is where I was sitting. After that, I flew into the dashboard because my seatbelt was not locked, and lost consciousness for
Once upon a time there was a 19-year-old named Alex Jackson, and he was bored. Since his parents had gone on vacation, Alex didn’t have that much to do. Alex liked math and chess, but chess tournaments came up once a month. Recreational chess wasn’t fun because no one would play with him, and ‘recreational math’ was not a thing. He never cared about the newspaper, and frolicking in the playground was gone at age 6. Well, Alex thought, at least there’s going to be a chess tournament this afternoon. Still, life seems boring, and it's not getting better. Nothing's come up, and nothing ever will. Alex walked around his house, thinking about nothing in particular. I actually need to do something. There’s nothing to do but sit and wait until I leave
“Angelina I beg of you, please eat the kibbles,” I plead to her as she lays restless with tired eyes and immense stubbornness on the rug closest to the door, refusing to be anywhere near cooperative.