The Loch Ness Monster Alternate Ending

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It was a brisk morning and the water of the North Sea was bitterly cold. Bach had just woken up in the stomach of the Loch Ness monster. Bach can not see anything, it is completely dark. He is getting very confused and is starting to get heated about where he is. Bach finds a small passage by feeling around with his hands. Bach crawls through the passage and hits a unusual wall. Suddenly he remembers where he was and what had happened to him. Bach punches through the teeth of the Loch Ness monster and knocks all off them to the bottom of the North Sea. Then he swims out of his mouth and to the top of the water. Bach sees the shoreline about 40-50 feet away and decides to try to swim to shore. Bach was swimming as fast as he could, he reaches …show more content…

Suddenly right before the big beast was going to clobber up Bach with its big mouth, it stops right in it’s tracks and stares right into Bach’s eyes. Bach swims a little bit to see what the Loch Ness monster does. It does nothing, all it does is look right at Bach. So bach climbs on the back of the Loch Ness monster and presses the shock button once, right as he hits the button the monster recoiled backwards and then started to go forward faster and faster. Bach yelled to him, “ Let's find Lildo and get back to shore”, and so they headed out to find Lildo in her small …show more content…

As she sits there in her boat she can feel the water around her vibrating a little bit. Just as she looks over the edge of her life boat Bach and the Loch Ness Monster shoot out from the water and over Lildo’s life boat. Then they come back to the top of the water and Bach grabs Lildo’s hand and Lildo gets on the back of the Loch Ness monster and they ride to shore. Once they arrive on shore Lildo and Bach get off the Loch Ness monster's back and they walk to the nearest store to call a taxi. They find a store 100 yards away from the shore, they walk into the store and ask the clerk if they could use there phone. They get the phone and right before they were going to dial a number, they overhear two people talking about a large cruise ship about 30 miles offshores that is being held captive and is being threatened to be blown up. Lildo rushes over to the two people talking and asks about the cruise ship that is being held captive. The two strangers tell her that there was a story on the news that the captain of the ship called into the police and said that they are being held captive and that they need help immediately. The call for help was called in about an hour ago and it is already in the local

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