Personal Statement: Class Rank

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School. Grades. Application. College. 6 AM alarms. Homework. GPA. Teachers. Parents. Deadline. Allnighter. Essay. AP. IB. Honors. College. Dual Credit. Class Rank. All things a student deals with. Along with the pressure to do well in school.
Pressure is one of many things that lies on dedicated students’ shoulders, but to preserve through the stress of the class, it’s something that advanced students should be prepared for, or at least that’s what the parents tend to say. Students are expected to enroll in classes they can handle, so the hard working kids will take advanced placement, honors, and college courses, to push themselves at an adequate level; on the other side, the average or lazy students will enroll in the regular courses. There’s …show more content…

The structure of enrollment has turned into: George is enrolling into this class because it will make him look smarter than his competitors, instead of: George is interested in chemistry, so he’ll take advanced placement chemistry. Pressure on students isn’t needed from external forces. Students have to worry about school enough on their own, adding the comments from adults who wouldn’t understand the struggle doesn’t help. It’s like from the tv show The Pitch, in the first episode, I can’t remember the girl’s name, it shows her struggle of becoming the first female, professional baseball player. She ends up failing at the first game because everyone was telling her who to play for and how to act and that she was a hero to little girls all around the world. She didn’t deserve the pressure. I don’t know the exact line, but she said-- I don’t need to be playing for them. I didn’t ask to be these little girl’s hero. I just came to play ball. It’s a good message for anyone: George shouldn’t have to enroll in six advanced courses to please his parents, he should do it solely because he enjoys the class. Life isn’t about pleasing other people, it’s not worth it. Students shouldn’t have to live their youth day in, day out, worried about the disappointment of a teacher, parent, or school, because they’re just kids in this screwed up school

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