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“Mommy, where are we going?” I trudged along holding all my belongings on my back, besides my teddy bear, I held him in my arms. We seemed to have been walking for hours but every time I asked Mommy where we were going, she just kept saying we were almost there. Maybe she would have a different response this time. “We are almost there, honey. Just keep walking. We will make it there soon.” Her voice sounded tired and dreary. I wanted to stop and take a rest but I knew that I couldn’t just stop with this big crowd around us. I looked down at my chest, seeing my beautiful golden star that I wore over my heart. I didn’t know why I had to wear it but Mommy said that only the most special people got to wear one. “Look, honey. Those are the gates! We are almost there!” Mommy’s voice seemed to suddenly be spurred with hope and light. I looked up to see huge iron gates that seemed to glare down at us. …show more content…

“Well, we have to, Hannah. This is going to be our new home.” She tried to smile but I could tell it wasn’t her usual bright smile. I shrugged it off though and kept just putting one foot in front of the other. Everyone had slowed down as they realized that we were almost to our destination. Then a loud, cruel voice broke through the silence. “Keep moving, you animals!” The voice startled me and Mommy and we instinctively picked up our pace. As the gate got closer, my knees got weaker. It looked dark and scary inside there. “Mommy, I don’t want to go in there!” My lip started to pout as I felt tears coming to my eyes. “It’s okay, honey. We will be okay in there.” Mommy reached down and grabbed my hand as we kept getting

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