Mama Mouse: A Narrative Fiction

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"Oh, Max." said Mama Mouse. "This just means Santa must have come." Max looked confused. "If Mr. Santa was supposed to spread holiday cheer, why would he eat all the cookies?" Papa Mouse chuckled. "Max, don't you know? The more cookies you bring Santa the more present he brings."


"Presents?!" Max got really excited. He has always wanted the Cheese-A-Tron 2000! It is a yellow scooter with cheese scented handle bars and goes faster than all the other mice scooters! Max knew what he had to do to get that scooter.

He ran straight into the humans' kitchen and squeeeeezed into the cabinet. He started rummaging through all the boxes until... he found it! The box of sugar cookie mix! He heard it was Mr. Santa's favorite.

He scurried into the refrigerator and got out the eggs, milk and whoooole lot of BUTTER!

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He scurried back into his hole and went straight to bed. Hoping that Mr. Santa Clause would come back with his scooter.

"IT'S CHRISTMAS MORNING!!!!" said Papa Mouse. Max was already up and waiting at the door to go out into the humans' house to see if he had gotten the scooter. "You must be very excited, Max." said Papa Mouse. "Papa, I made a whole bunch of cookies last night for Mr. Santa, so he would get me the Cheese-A-Tron 2000!" squeaked Max. "Well, why don't you go and check under the tree, Son."

Max scampered to the big green tree. He ran all around, until... there it was! A tiny box, WITH MAX'S NAME ON IT! "Oh boy, oh boy!" said Max. "Could it be?!" He pushed the box into his hole and began to open it in front of his Mama and Papa.

It was the Cheese-A-Tron 2000! "Thank you, Mr. Santa!" said Max as he sniffed the handle bars. "Christmas is the best!"

At the end of the day, they gathered together as a family to watch their favorite Christmas movie through their little hole in the wall. "Mousey Chritsmas." whispered Mama and Papa Mouse. Max smiled up at them and whispered, "Mousey

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