The Power of Life-Changing Effects with Jimmy Santiago Baca
It takes being completely broken in order to come back from the unthinkable, stronger than before. Jimmy Santiago Baca, the writer of A Place to Stand, shares his story of his life which proves to everyone that no matter how bad you have it, someone has it worse. Baca transitions throughout his whole book and is an exact image of what a survivor is but in his case no one saved his life literally. Figuratively, poetry was his saving grace. Baca pens, “I began to compose sentimental poems. I discovered that good and bad experiences had hibernated in me, and when they awoke they did so without warning and with the velocity of a sniper bullet, making me shake and choke up” (Baca 189).
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While Baca was in prison for a little over two years, at this point, he was not a master at reading and writing. Overtime, Baca would just think about all of his thoughts from his childhood and past relationships and put them to a piece of paper. By doing this, he begins to feel more in control of himself and can see that there is more that life can offer him. Baca’s poetry shows a more elaborate and detailed emotion than the book does. His poems, “I am Offering This Poem”, “Who Understands Me but Me”, and “Immigrants in Our Own Land” disclose countless amounts of messages of character transformation that the author illustrates within his prison memoir A Place to Stand. While Baca is in the Florence prison, he gets put into the hole due to the fact that he stopped doing his work in the cell and around the prison.
This rebellious action was a result from not being allowed to return to school so Baca would be able to read and write. He is then told by Captain (Mad Dog) Madril, “This committee cannot in good faith recommend school at the present time. Prisoner is assigned field duty for six months. Request for schooling will be considered at that point” (Baca 163). Baca was denied for education privileges because he was said to be, “- a menace to society,” (Baca 162) by a black sergeant. When assigned to the hole, he had the opportunity to get away from everything on the outside. The hole has a hold over Baca’s mind and brings back the memories to when he was a child and happy. In his poem, “I am Offering this Poem” Baca’s tone to his audience is all about poetry bringing comfort, warmth and protection. He writes, “Keep it, treasure this as you would if you were lost, needing direction, in the wilderness life becomes when mature” (“Offering”). Wanting an education, Baca soon realizes that poetry acts as a map or guide to get away, or finding a place back to somewhere or …show more content…
someone. Furthermore, Baca is a great role model in the aspect of never giving up on what you want for yourself and life.
It is very miserable to witness or know a person who has not had the best upbringing into the world. With no one to give love, reassurance and commitment to them but unfortunately, at the same time, an outsider can only do so much to help. Baca pens about his encounter with Coach Tracy and how he was welcoming Baca into his home to meet his family as a step to adopt him. Baca quickly shut them out even though he liked them, but of course that was a problem in his eyes at the time from everything he had heard by his grandfather. In another one of his poems Baca penciled, “when the walls were built higher, when the water was turned off and the windows painted black. I followed these signs” (“Understands”). His message to his audience is that if change is what is being searched for, no one can help but themselves. Guidance and signs will only be provided by loved ones, teachers, counselors but the hard work is obtained by the one wanting the change to happen. Baca is not a God or magical hero, he is simply an ordinary guy who happened to make a life for himself even through the hardships and struggles that were thrown his way. That is what life is after all. An opportunity to acquire the lessons and obstacles that either make people soar to greatness or settle for what they believe they
deserve. Finally, throughout his memoir, transformation is huge characteristic and ideal concept of the book. Starting at such a young age, he was already exposed to the inside of a prisoner’s life and that prisoner was his own father. Witnessing that in and of itself is petrifying, confusing and inappropriate. Since that moment on Baca figured that was not a bad place to be considering his father was held there. Nonetheless, living in the past is not the best life choice to make. Resentment and regrets are a popular outcome from living in the past, looking at Baca again when he was in isolation. Thinking back to when he was a young boy with his mother leaving his siblings and himself and replaying every little detail to see what he could have done makes him physically and emotionally on a rollercoaster that will not stop. He composes, “But in the end, some will just sit around talking about how good the old world was” (“Immigrants”). Everyday lives are being shaped from choices that are being made through the good and bad times. Giving up on life and not caring what the outcome is, is not an option but sadly, many others take what seems to be the easy way out. The harder way is much more challenging but once the object is achieved, the view over the mountain is breathtaking. Baca did not give up because poetry found him, that was his shimmer of hope to make a change. In conclusion, Baca has so much to offer with not only his way of words through his poetry but also teaching and being a published author. Not many can say they are happy with what has become with their life but Baca is a true inspiration, with the throwing judgements and insults all of his life. The saying about do not let anyone tell you that you cannot do something is completely true, what is even better than making it all the way is the satisfaction of showing everyone that doubted it in the first place wrong. Baca might argue that all people need the comfort, nourishment, protection and the direction. Whether they find that in music or writing or a hobby, the place to stand is the feeling of self assurance and pride in oneself. Because after all, a house does not have a place to stand without a foundation to support it. Works Cited: Baca, Jimmy Santiago. A Place to Stand: the Making of a Poet. New York, Grove Press, 2001. ---. “I Am Offering This Poem.” Poetry Foundation, Poetry Foundation, www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-and-poets/poems/detail/53092. Accessed 8 May 2017. ---. “Immigrants in Our Own Land.” Poetry Foundation, Poetry Foundation, www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-and-poets/poems/detail/49558. Accessed 8 May 2017. ---. “Who Understands Me but Me” Poetry Foundation, Poetry Foundation, www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-and-poets/poems/detail/53093. Accessed 8 May 2017.
He explains that “I could respond, escape, indulge; embrace or reject earth or the cosmos” (Baca 55). Baca was exploring on an endless journey without any boundaries, in which he could see his past floating around him. He saw his future and what language was doing to him. Baca expresses that “each word steamed with the hot lava juices of my primordial making, and I crawled out of stanzas dripping with birth-blood, reborn and freed from the chaos of my life” (55). Baca was no longer a captive of his own emotions never feeling like a victim of other people’s mockery and intimidation. He was physically in prison but in his poems, he was anywhere that he wanted to be. With the power of words Baca realized he could do anything and soon overcame his fears of
The second strong line is: “And it was hate and rage towards abusive teachers that kept me going year after year…with the hope that one day I’d get published, and have a voice, so I could make difference down here in our hearts, and guts,” I said, grabbing hold of my own gut, “where we really live, if we’ve going to live a life worth living!” This strong line made me feel like Victor Villasenor have been through many abusive, bullied, from teachers and friends. However, he created hope in his life to motivate what he loves to do and defending himself through passion
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Incarnation usually transforms an inmate, but sometimes it's not always for their best interest. Jimmy Santiago Baca, the author of A Place to Stand, did however learn how to transform to better himself and his future for after prison life. While in prison Baca teaches himself how to read and write despite being illiterate from a very young age. By teaching himself how to read and write, Baca transforms his life through his love of poetry. This also helped him survive in jail for the 5 years he was there. His poems “I Am Offering This Poem”, “Who Understands Me but Me”, and “Immigration in Our Own Land” convey multiple messages of character transformation and survival that Jimmy depicts within his prison memoir A Place to Stand.
book remains a true testimony to the resilience of the human mind, body, and spirit.
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Gonzales, Laurence. Deep Survival: Who Lives, Who Dies, and Why: True Stories of Miraculous Endurance and Sudden Death. New York: W.W. Norton &, 2003. Print.
Similar to Thoreau, Baca uses imagery to connect and transpose his audience into the moments that he experiences in order to conjure feelings and emotion. The second stanza of the poem provides a vivid description of Baca’s surroundings. Describing the prison yard at length emphasis the entrapment the prisoners feel, including himself. His long poetic phrases serve to connect the audience to the feelings that he experiences in that moment. He employment of this method is identical to Thoreau and the outcome is the same. Baca also enhances his imagery and projection of emotion through the use of similes. In the first stanza of the poem, Baca describes the state of the prison as, “ A wall of wind crashes against, / windows clunk against, iron frames
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