Dance Application Essay

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Welcome parents, administrators, and classmates to the eighth grade promotion. After surviving through three years of essays, assignments, and tests, we finally graduated. Everyone here has accomplished so much since sixth grade. For me, I was able to wake up early roughly 540 times in the past three years. If I have learned one thing during my time at MJS, it is that I’m not a morning person. Waking up early was presumably the most challenging part of middle school, but somehow I found the motivation to do so. An unknown individual once said, “Desire is the key to motivation, but it's commitment to an unrelenting pursuit of your goal that will enable you to attain success.” This is certainly correct. With perseverance, one will ultimately …show more content…

They danced in perfect unison like soldiers. Their technique was flawless; every foot was constantly pointed. They performed with such grace; it seemed as though they were floating above the dance floor. I hoped one day I would be able to dance like them, so that year, I worked diligently to prove I belonged in such a class. My technique did improve, and teachers at the studio started to notice. I paid more attention to the teacher’s feedback and attempted to apply the corrections to my dancing. I focused on minor details like arm placement and stage presence. At the end of the year, I walked into a lyrical audition with full confidence. Miraculously, the vigorous work paid off, as I got into the exact lyrical class I had previously marveled over. Today, the lyrical class is still my favorite. It was the first time I had attempted to complete an important goal. I realized that hard work and perseverance amount to success; it’s not pointless. The advanced class was a lighthouse that led me across the ocean. I dodged massive waves and sharp rocks until I was strong enough to reach the shoreline, my …show more content…

Princeton wants a student who puts in 50 hours of work to receive a useless silver award, so that’s what I did. Well, that’s what I’m trying to do. For my silver award, I’ve been working at the community garden, planting vegetables for local soup kitchens. I have about 20 hours so far and only a few months to complete 30 more hours. I suppose I haven’t been committed to this project. I lack motivation, except for that college application. Honestly, the last time I visited the garden, I barely did any work, as there were little roly-polys occupying my soil and I didn’t want to touch them. It’s almost as if my lighthouse is dimmed and I can't view the obstacles in my way- the time constraints that are not on my side, the vegetable garden I don’t know how to care for. Most importantly, I’m unable to detect the shore. I can’t imagine completing this project or receiving this award. However, my goal will be in sight if I just keep moving

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