Culture in Piano and Drums by Gabriel Okara

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Culture in Piano and Drums by Gabriel Okara

In the poem “Piano and Drums” the poet Gabriel Okara depicts and

contrasts two different cultures through symbolism of pianos and

drums.

The Poem is divided into four stanzas. The first two stanzas represent

the “drum” culture and the second two stanzas show the “piano”

culture.

The description of the drums is in two stanzas, but is one sentence

long. The first line of the first stanza:

‘When at break of day at a riverside’

Uses trochees to emphasize the deliberate broken rhythm. The stanza

has savage words, “bleeding flesh,” “urgent raw,” “leopard snarling,”

“spears poised,” to show that this is a primitive culture, one which

has dependency on the environment, as is represented by the “hunters

crouch with spears poised.” The environment in this culture is

physically dangerous, surrounded by wild animals. Drums here are a way

of communication, and “jungle drums telegraphing the mystic rhythm,

urgent, raw…” shows the way of life in this culture. This is life

which is simple, near the beginnings of man. The stanza uses

alliteration, consonances and similes to give a rhythm that is like

that of a drum.

Threatening imagery is also used to give the image of danger and show

physical hazards.

The first stanza mainly describes the way of life and sets the scene.

It shows how the drums are associated with the jungle and a primitive

way of life.

In the second stanza the persona says how when he hears the drums, he

goes back to his youth, “my blood ripples, turns torrent, topples the

years...” reminiscent of his childhood to when things were simpler and

carefree, “in my mother’s lap a suckling.” The repetition of the ‘t’

sound in “turns, torrent and top...

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...” shows how he is lost between the two societies-

between his background and upbringing and what he is aspired to be.

“Wandering in the mystic rhythm of jungle drums and the concerto.”

The poem follows a logical format with each stanza beginning with

“When, And, Then and And.” The connotations of each instrument

contrast with one another, with Drums illustrating primitive

behaviour, and a savage, dangerous culture. The connotations of the

piano are complex and technical. The piano uses significantly

different word sounds, showing that it is learnt, westernized and

intricate compared to the drums which is instinctive and naturally

acquired, and simple.

The poem uses no set rhyme pattern which suits the poem as it has an

undecided effect, emphasizing the confusion of the persona over his

future. There is some iambic use as well as the use of trochees.

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