Cataract Operation

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Cataract Operation

Title

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The title refers to the removal of a dull film from the eyes. This is

a poem about sight and awareness.

Structure

Another poem of twenty lines, being made up of ten couplets. Again the

poet plays with rhyme as in the pun "hens" and "lens".

Language

The poem is rife with cliché, metaphor and puns. The poem starts with

a very distinctive simile:

"The sun comes like a head

through last night's turtleneck."

This not only gives the reader a comical image of the sun coming up

but links this time of day with waking up and hurrying to dress up in

yesterday's clothes. By changing everyday ordinary things into

extraordinary images, the poet creates a vivid picture and a sense of

movement. He does this through his choice of words, his use of

colloquial expressions and his use of metaphor. Notice how he

describes the pigeon. The expression "turns tail" is particularly

effective because it suggests that the pigeon is turning and "taking

flight", all in one quick movement. Comparing the tail to a magician

fanning out a pack of cards also works well because it expresses the

magic of a brief moment when the pigeon opens out its tail feathers.

The theatrical metaphor is continued with "a pantomime of damp,

forgotten washing" which now plays out the entertainment, where these

ordinary things are transformed. So, as the wind stirs the washing,

the poet imagines a bull fight enacted with the crimson towel, a

can-can danced by the fluttering ra-ra skirt, the mischievous

behaviour of the shirt, which flaps animatedly in the wind pegged only

by its sleeve, waving of a handkerchief like an informal goodbye, and

imagines a parade of hens are a company of soldiers strutting round

the courtyard. Parts of the pictures are real and some are imagined.

The poem can be compared to a magic eye picture. If it is studied for

long enough, the picture changes and hidden images emerge.

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