Ben Hollywood's 'Building A Fire'

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Levi Frederickson Mrs. Sechrist Eng. 8 15/5/23 Survival Argumentative Essay Luck: “Success or failure apparently brought by chance rather than through one’s own action. At this point in history, there is usually a strategy to luck, even in the real world, when there is a life-or-death situation. The most important factor that affects survival is mental strength. In the article “What it takes to survive a crisis” by Ben Sherwood, he tries to show that a person's mental strength determines whether they survive a crisis or not. In paragraph 16 the article states “’Luck is not a magical ability or gift from the gods’ Wisen writes. ‘Instead, it is a state of mind, a way of thinking and behaving.’” Some people may try and find out if they're …show more content…

This statement can be easily refuted with one quote from paragraph 22, which states “no wind had blown for weeks, and each bough was fully freighted”. Each time he had pulled a twig, he had communicated a slight agitation to the tree- imperceptible agitation, so as far as he was concerned, but sufficient to bring about the disaster. High up in the tree, 1 bough capsized its load of snow. This fell on the boughs beneath, capsizing them.” This mistake could have been avoided by not building the fire under the tree or taking branches directly above the fire. People can relate to this when they do something stupid like forgetting to put a lock on a locker and the stuff in the locker gets stolen. Another thing that also refutes the false claim is in paragraph 33, which says “This threw him into a panic, and he turned and ran up the Creek bed along the old dim trail.” The man had failed to make another fire and resulted in running, which is not great because it takes a lot of energy to run a long distance, especially with gear on. This mistake could and will lead to death, which was the man's fault for not trying to think things through and not some random force called luck. People may be able to relate to this when they rush to get a job done in the last second, but don't do well on it and something like getting demoted or

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