An Abandoned Bundle by Mbuyiseni Oswald Mtshali
Nightfall in Soweto by Mbuyiseni Oswald Mtshali
How have two poems confirmed or altered your views and feelings?
An Abandoned Bundle and Nightfall in Soweto are both veracious poems that have enlightened me about the poverty and anguish suffered in South Africa, as well as the desperation that people in these places suffer.
These poems convey life in third world slums, and the brutal, dangerous situations that people endure.
In An Abandoned Bundle, Mtshali recounts his discovery of an abandoned child, on faeces and garbage, attacked by wild dogs. Mtshali begins the poem with very soothing image of “morning mist” over a “white city”, however this is quickly distorted by the harsh, graphic simile
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Mtshali describes another ghostly reality of the slums in Nightfall in Soweto. In this poem Mtshali tells the tale of the slum, Soweto, and how it becomes a “murder town” when the sun sets. Similes and severe imagery are used, describing it as a “rabid dog” and “dreaded disease” which indicates that the population in this town is predatory. These murderous connotations amplify Soweto as a deadly, unsafe city.
The poem is structured so that both the opening and end of the poem strike the confronting truth of the slums, such as “Nightfall comes like a dreaded disease seeping through pores” and “he barks like a rabid dog...thirsty for my blood”. The middle section the poem establishes the dangerous and brutal experiences through comments such as, “I am the victim” and “marauding beast let loose… from his cage of
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Nightfall is portrayed as a threatening person, evoking fear of those who live in traumatic dread. The hard repetition of the letter “d” throughout the poem emphasizes the grim nature of the slums. The forceful alliterative statement “ravaging it beyond repair” creates a similar malevolent tenor.
“I am slaughtered
“every night in the streets.”
These two lines capture the distressing, emotional damage caused living and hiding in his “matchbox” house.. Mtshali’s use of imagery conveys the dark, gruesome and lethal setting in which cannot live in safety. This creates great distress for me, as I am safe at night, whereas these people live in great fear of murder.
Powerful verbs used by Mtshali like “gnawing”, “slaughtered” and “ravaging” highlight the severity of the city and the danger that is posed. This jarring diction not only shows the constant horror the residents feel, but also evokes disgust and fear from readers.
Mtshali has used enjambment in this poem to create dramatic pauses after substantial comments such as;
“Nightfall comes like “he barks like a rabid dog a dreaded disease” thirsty for my
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