The Rake

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They yelled, “Jake are you there? Where are you? This is not funny, come out wherever you are.” So they started walking around.
Ken saw something with big green glowing eyes. He thought it was Jake and shined his flashlight on the thing with green glowing eyes. When he did, he saw a weird monster with no hair, just white shriveled skin and long fingers razor sharp, kind of like a rake. The monster turned around real quick and looked at Ken. The monster was covered in blood, and right next to the monster, laying on the ground, was his friend Jake. Jakes’ body was being devoured by this monster. Ken realized Jake was dead, and he was about to die too. So, Ken shot the monster but nothing happened to the monster. Then the monster stood up and charged Ken, and Ken was frozen in fear, and he knew he was going to die. Twenty seconds later Ken was dead, and his body was being devoured just like his friend Jake.
John was still looking for Jake. John was softly calling, “Jake you there?” over and over again. About five minutes later, John saw two green glowing eyes. He thought, “What the heck is that?” He had his pellet gun aimed at the thing, and shot it but nothing happened to it. Being shot at was all that made it mad and made it stand up and look John in the eyes. John was frozen in fear, a couple seconds later John realized him this thing was coming right after him. He quickly turned around and ran. In about ninety feet, he tripped on a branch and twisted his ankle. He was crawling now and saw the monster. About a minute later, the monster picked him up and snapped him in half like a twig. Then the monster began to eat his body.
It was about one in the morning, now, and only five friends where still alive. Jeremy was still looking for...

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... sat down and had a drink of water, and he got ahold of himself and his breathing. Austin told his parents everything that happened tonight in Screaming Woods. Once Austin was done telling his parents, they told him to go to bed. Once Austin was asleep, Austin’s parents called the cops and told them what their son told them. After that phone call, alot of cops went to the woods to look for the six children.
The next day, all six of the bodies were found. Those bodies were returned in body bags to their parents. The cops told each parent the story of the only kid who survived the attack last night from The Rake.
Now the small village in England is safe. The Screaming Woods is now safer and the town is, too. The town made a monument for all the kids who had a part in this tragedy. The village can only thank those eight kids who had the courage to take on The Rake.

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