The Raid - Original Writing

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The Raid - Original Writing The man, dressed in a long black overcoat, glanced at his watch. It was 11:30pm on a dark, miserable London night. He was waiting inside his white BMW for the pickup. Finally he saw the headlights, picking their way through the smoke; rain; darkness and fog, pulling into the deserted car-park. It was a black Mercedes with tinted windows. A short man got out, closely followed by two taller men, his cronies. He was dressed in a smart black suit and carried a large briefcase in his right hand. "You got the money?" He demands "If you got the stuff" "Good, we can proceed" The smaller man opened his briefcase, the buyer knew what was inside; 2 large bags, full of class A drugs. "Good, now that will be £250, 000 like we agreed" "Assuming all is in order" He took out a pen-knife from his inside pocket and made a small slit in one of the bags; he rubbed a small amount of the white powder onto his gum. "Very good" he went back to his own BMW, took out his own briefcase and handed it to the short man, "I hope its all there" he said "Of course it is! Hey, what was that?" It was the faint sound of a police siren getting closer and closer. Both men rushed frantically to their cars but before they could step on the accelerator they were surrounded by 2 or 3 police cars. The police got out of their cars, using their doors as shields, their guns pointed at the two cars. There was another siren as an armed response unit and a riot van pulled into the car park. The armed units positioned themselves around the car park, almost completely surrounding the 2 cars. There was an eerie silence across the deserted car park; you could almost hear the suspect's heavy breathing. There was so much tension in the air it felt like you could physically cut it.

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