Se-Wong Koo's The Smartest Kids In The World

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In Se-Woong Koo’s article “An Assault Upon Our Children,” Koo’s asserts that with South Korea's infamous education system, it is taking a toll on students' mental state. He supports this claim by first commenting “Among youth South Koreans who confessed to feeling suicidal in 2010, an alarming 53 percent identified inadequate academic performance as the main reason for such thoughts”(Koo). In The Smartest Kids in the World, Amanda Ripley reports “The system had become overly competitive leading to an unhealthy preoccupation with test scores and a dependence on private tutoring academies”(Ripley 60). Because of the competitive education, students do not have enough time to find themselves and have more resentment to other students who are getting …show more content…

She develops this claim by first reports “For a typical high school student, the official school day may end at 4 pm, but can drag on for grueling hours at private cram institutes or in-school study hall, often not wrapping until 11 pm”(Hu). In The Smartest Kids in the World, Amanda Ripley reported her friends experience of being an exchange student in Korea, “He had tried to keep his mind open,but he dreaded those days at Namsan, sitting for six hours with students too stressed-or exhausted- to talk for more than five minutes between classes,then taking the bus home alone”(Ripley 66). Because of students studying till midnight, they get the majority of their sleep during classes and it is such of a common occurrence that even teachers will allow students to sleep during class.And finally, Hu reports how planes are not allowed to fly during their college entry exams because they fear it will distract them from the test. Hu’s purpose in writing this piece is to inform readers of the social effects from South Korea's education in order to build awareness. She establishes a concerned tone, as seen when she describes “And there are social consequences,too. Many parents say they chose not to have more children because supporting all the cramming simply costs too much”(Hu). By using a concerned tone,, the author makes clear that not …show more content…

In order for South Korea to get the best students, the education system started to drown the students in stress and competition. High School students are pressured into studying for a test that will decide their entire life, This test will affect what job a person can get, what friends they are able to make and who they will be allowed to marry. In The Smartest Kids in the World, Amanda Ripley reports “This competition followed very explicit rules: score above a certain number on the college exam, and you were automatically admitted to a top university. Forever after, you would be paid more than others, even for doing the same work”(Ripley 59). It is clearly evident why student are solely focused on studying and spend their after school hours at cram schools, hagwons. Ripley reports that “South Korea’s hagwon crackdown is one part of a larger quest to tame the country’s culture of educational masochism”(Ripley). South Korea is not effectively changing the education system because they are just shutting down cram schools and they are not adjusting the educational system itself. If the South Korean government does not change its education system, the vicious cycle will still remain and it will not only hurts the students physically, but also mentally. If South Korea does change their education effectively, South Korean students will no longer treat education as the grim

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