In “Root Cellar” by Theodore Roethke uses diction, imagery, and tone to display the various layers to the work. He describes smells and sets up visual imagery in the poem to contrast the actual message. The tone in the poem shows the underlying theme of life beneath the moldy cellar itself.
Diction in the poem is, by itself, very dark. It easily prompts the reader to recoil at the cellar the speaker is describing. Roethke makes a point to use words with negative connotation to get the full disgusting effect. In writing “Nothing would sleep in that cellar, dank as a ditch,” (Line 1) he immediately prompts the reader into thinking that the poem is serious and negative. The reader assumes from the initial reading of that line that the cellar is inhabitable and just unsavory overall. However, there is no denying that the cellar the speaker is referring to is pleasant in any shape or form.
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However, the most obvious literary element in “Root Cellar” is imagery.
He uses smell to convey just how disgusting the cellar is to the speaker. In lines seven and eight, the speaker describes the plants’ scents as “ripe as old bait” and “rank”. He also uses words like “manure and mildewed”. These words are used to engage the reader, banking on the fact that we all have experienced these smells before. Roethke explains the cellar using this type of language to get across how unpleasant and revolting it is down there. His visual imagery also aids in setting up the scene. Roethke throws similes in the poem to help the reader picture the plants. In using phrases such as “dangled and drooped” and “lolling obscenely” (Lines 4-5) they allow the reader to instantly picture the roots hanging and creeping along in the cellar. Roethke utilizes imagery in a masterful way to where even if the reader has never been in or seen a root cellar, they can imagine what this particular one was
like. The tone of the work, despite its dark setting, is actually very light. It shows the determination of the plants to live. Its optimistic in the fact that the plants continue to find ways to thrive in their unfavorable conditions. The last two lines definitely show that the plants are surviving with a determination to flourish by saying “Nothing would give up life: Even the dirt kept breathing a small breath.”. There is also a sense of admiration from the speaker in this poem. The words used also seem to be impressed by the plants’ ability to live and create life in their present situation. Roethke uses literary elements to convey the images of the root cellar to the reader while also trying to give a general message of survival and strength. He uses diction and imagery to make the reader automatically view the poem as dark and somber. However, he manages to slip in the ironic themes of survival and life into it despite all the negativity.
The poem commences with a debate between the mother and daughter about what they should do with the black walnut tree. Lines 1-15 are written in straightforward, easy to comprehend language. In these lines the speaker addresses why they should sell the tree. The two women give reasons by stating that the tree is growing weak, and given the tree’s proximity to the house, a storm will cause it to collapse into their house and pose a threat to their lives. In addition, the speaker claims that “roots in the cellar drains,” meaning the roots of the tree are getting bigger and spreading into the foundation of the house, thereby producing another danger to the well-being of the family. Moreover, the tree is getting older (“the leaves are getting heavier”), and the walnuts produced by the tree are becoming to gather. The tone of the mother and daughter shows their need for money but also a reluctance to selling the tree; they are desperately in need of money, but they don’t seem to be in favor of selling the tree. Although the reasons provided by the family are credible, they are not wholehearted. This is because the women “talk slowly…...
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