Ridgewater College Cafeteri Personal Narrative Analysis

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The Positivity of Ridgewater College Cafeteria
The cafeteria at Ridgewater College is a pleasant place to eat food where tons of people gather. It has a very unique nourishment wise. The taste and the smell of the nutrient is sweet. Once people walk in you have a different instinct, then you were thinking before. Furthermore, its dining tables and chairs are attractive. The flooring of the cafeteria looks great. The floor has the campus logo. TVs are there due to the seminars that are held there most of the time, and they also make announcements of what is going on around the campus. The cafeteria is also holds orientation for newcomer and students. Also, there are pool tables where students congregate once they come there during their off …show more content…

In my positive paragraph, my best word choice was “congregate’’ instead of using the word “gather” for a better word choice. The paragraph started “Also there are pool tables where students congregate once they come there during their off classes”. The word “congregate” out shines the rest of the sentence. From my point of view utilizing the word “congregate”, will make the paragraph more absorbing for the audience to read and also me not using the word “gather” helps to make the paragraph more accountable to the audience to know how significant the word “congregate” fits better to understand the student’s aroma, for their time at the pool tables. Beyond that the word “congregate” is better to use rather than “gather” because gather sounds like does not sound like an academic word. While “congregate” seems to be a more professional word to use instead. In my negative paragraph, my best word choice was “Bad” instead of using the “adverse”. The sentence I choice the word from started like this “the staff that work there are bad people’’. Using the word ‘’bad’’ for a negative word choice gives a powerful affection of negative reaction students have about the staff there. Consequently, the staff being “bad” shows that a negativity towards students and other faculty. As for the audience they are going to have a glimpse look of this passage and when they get to the word “bad”, they might almost have a negative idea of the staff at the cafeteria. This word better fit here because it is a simpler word also. Word choice and figurative of language generates pictures in the mind of the readers. Incorporating word choice and figurative language helps produce a positive and negative image of the

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