Response To The Poem 'Heaven' By William Xiong

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I discussed several concepts with my writing fellow, William Xiong. He specifically mentioned that my addition of the Buddha background story was very fascinating perspective that brought another dimension to my analysis. He also mentioned that my main ideas were clearly stated and easy to see how they connected. Furthermore, he said I should not be concerned with my audience since I did consider my audience with my explanations to each idea. Out of several suggestions, he addressed that I should rearrange my second and third paragraphs for better flow so I can keep the moon roles of the romantic and spiritual roles together. In addition, he also suggested that I should continue my theme of “reality versus desired reality” throughout the whole …show more content…

Now surely the moon shining so intensely in the sky seemed cruel indeed, as if it refused to comprehend the depth of my sorrow. This poem and prose are taken from a diary written by Lady Nijō in 1307, and they reflect her emotions of grief and loneliness. The poem on a literal level takes place on a clear night with a bright moon in the sky. The prose provides additional information about a nun, Lady Nijō, who grieves for her love who had passed away. Her grieving is explained through the poem’s contrasting lines with the theme of her reality versus her desired reality. The first line with the “bright moon” contrasts with the last line of the moon being “dimmed and clouded over”. On a figurative level, Lady Nijō is left to long for her lover who is out of reach like the moon instead of being able to be with him. The second line with the feeling of “cruel mockery” contrasts with the third line of the feeling of “happy”. The figurative meaning of these lines could be that she wants to be happy or less sad at that moment, but instead she is mocked and left in even more …show more content…

The first half of the poem discusses the natural scenery mocking her, and the second half of the poem discusses her emotions of the mockery. The first half reveals the moon being a “cruel mockery”. In Japanese poetry, the moon plays a romantic role where it resembles a lover’s face and means to long for a lover. Therefore, in the prose, as the moon appears in the sky, the “images of His Majesty floated before my eyes” which causes Lady Nijō to long for her lover as she sees the face of her lover on the moon. The exclamation point further emphasizes the mockery of the moon and her notice of this act. The second half presents Lady Nijō’s feelings of wanting the moon to be “dimmed and clouded over” or to disappear, because seeing her lover’s face on the moon causes her pain. In addition to the moon resembling her lover’s face, in the poem, the moon is shining brightly that night and the brightness makes the moon hard to miss; thus, it strongly reminds Lady Nijō of her lover, which in turn, causes her to suffer even

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