Personal Narrative On The Trail

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The smell of pine and dirt filled my nose. The sunshine gleaming above the tree branches that seemed to touch the sky. The hot, sunny weather was shielded against by the tree tops. The chirping and singing from the birds could be heard throughout the forest. The sound of the creek rushing and running nearby as if it was full of energy. People chatted and laughed while strolling down the trail was reminiscent of a crowd. Who knew that going hiking can be fun and peaceful? Suddenly, my mind was brought back to reality when my aunt uttered, “Hold on, this doesn’t seem right!”
“What?”, my mom asked with a bewildered look on her face. My aunt responded while pointing at the map, “According to this map, this is not what the trail is supposed …show more content…

I didn’t even know if I could make it all the way! I wasn’t an experienced hiker or an athlete like my aunts and uncles, but alas, I kept on going. Eventually, we all were longing for a drink of water and a snack. I rummaged my hands through the bright orange backpack that my family brought with us. I was searching everywhere in the backpack, but no food could be found! “There’s no snacks in the backpack!” I shouted. “Are you serious? Just see if there’s any water bottles then,” sighed my aunt. I looked back down at the backpack and… There was a water bottle! I took it out and my mom exclaimed ecstatically, “Great, can you pass around all the bottled water that we have?” I shook my head and smiled, feeling positive, and reached my hand down into the backpack to get another bottle, but another one could not be found! I stood up, and responded, “Um, there is only one water bottle, so we'll just have to share.” Everyone frowned. I handed the only bottle we had and passed it to my cousin, he raised the bottle high above his head and cheered, “Yes, we have wat-,” He stopped mid-sentence when his hand slipped on the wattle bottle. The bottle tumbled down the forest hill, bumping into the bushes and tree trunks along the way. The sound of rustling leaves slowly faded as the water bottle was a far distance. “Now we have no food or water!” I exclaimed in utter …show more content…

As we were hiking near the top of the mountain, we could see the vast amount of trees in the forest. It was indeed beautiful scenery, but we were much too tired to admire it. We had reached a point where there was a lot of gravel on the trail which was hard to get a grip on. Abruptly, my foot had stepped on an area with loose gravel and I plummeted toward the ground. My hands flew out in front of me to steady myself, the rough gravel touched my hands. My mind was racing with thoughts, I should’ve been more observant of where I was going! My mom rushed to me and made sure I was okay. I felt scared, but from then on I was more cautious of where I was

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