Our Children Deserve A Healthy Start

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Childhood Obesity 1 As of late, childhood obesity has become an enormous problem, literally, in America. Children today spend a majority of their time in front of a television, computer, or phone screen. As stated in the article “Our Children Deserve a Healthy Start”, which was presented at the United States Conference of Mayors, childhood obesity has more than tripled in just the last thirty years. Obesity can put kids at a higher risk for high blood pressure, diabetes, heart disease, and many other diseases most commonly found in adults. This is an issue that can be avoided simply by exercise, a balanced diet, and educating our youth. From beginning to end of the article, the writer stresses the importance of cutting down …show more content…

The writer of this article does a phenomenal job of backing up their claim with strong reasons. During this writing, it is never said that childhood obesity needs to be stopped. With that being said, it makes that statement the warrant. It is assumed, by everyone, that childhood obesity is bad and needs to be taken more seriously, but it is never actually stated in the article. When the writer does not come out and directly say that, it gives the writer a strong warrant. The assumption goes unstated, but every person who reads the article knows that it does not need to be said because it is so obvious. Once again, the writer has another strong element of the Toulmin argument When it comes to the fourth and final Toulmin element, the grounds, the writer provides even more evidence why childhood obesity needs to be stopped. The writer says that as a parent, your children look up to you and do as you do. If a parent eats smart and is active, the children will do the same. The writer puts in perspective how east it could really be to cut down obesity in youth. This shows the writer is backing up their claim of wanting to put a stop to childhood obesity by finding simple ways for families, schools, and communities to get involved with the children to help them eat right and get

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