Literary Analysis: “Once More to the Lake” and “Forgetfulness” Time is everything. When you waste time on something you forget about the other important aspects in life. When you spend little time on something you tend to forget what you just heard in a short frame of time. The story “Once More to the Lake” by E.B. White and the poem “Forgetfulness” by Billy Collins both use syntax and diction to develop their common theme of Annihilated Time. Syntax is the way a sentence is structured and what is in it. Diction is your choice of words and how they relate to the text. First and foremost, in both texts, the authors use many commas as punctuation. One example of this in “Forgetfulness” is “As if, one by one, the memories you used to to …show more content…
harbor decided to retire to the southern hemisphere of the brain, to a little fishing village where there is no phones.” (stanza 2, Forgetfulness). Then, in “Once More to the Lake” it states “The small waves were the same, chucking the rowboat under the chin as we fish at anchor, and the boat was the same boat, the same color green and the ribs broken in the same places, and under the floorboards the same freshwater leaving and debris.” (5th Paragraph, Once More to the Lake). Both Authors are trying to show the theme of Annihilating Time here because a comma is like a pause, every time a comma is used in a certain place it wastes or “annihilates” time. Since there are commas, the person speaking pauses a lot. Moreover, in “Forgetfulness”, the person who is forgetting is using many commas and is dwelling on one specific topic and then while he is thinking of that one topic another one goes right out of his brain. “Something else is slipping away.” (Forgetfulness; 4th stanza). This is an example of that. Next, in “Once More to the Lake” the man pauses (with commas in the text) and talks about his son being exactly like him, but he forgets who he is really and how they have differences. “I began to sustain the illusion that he was I.” (4th Paragraph, Once More to the Lake) this quote shows where he starts to look at his son, and who he is rather than himself. The syntax in both texts help develop the common theme of Annihilated Time. Lastly, the story “Once More to the Lake” and the poem “Forgetfulness” use many forms of diction that help further the common theme of Annihilated Time.
In “Forgetfulness” it states “Long ago you kissed the name of the nine muses goodbye.”(3rd stanza, Forgetfulness). This infers that the person reciting the poem is older because he says “long ago”, that could mean that that line occurred 40 or 50 years ago. It proves that he is older. When you age or get older you tend to forget things more frequently than you did in the past. Since you’re forgetting you try and remember everything but you just forget while thinking hard about something. That’s just life, some may always have a strong memory while others, like the person in “Forgetfulness” will forget more than they could remember. Next, in “Once More to the Lake” E.B., White uses many descriptive and hard words. Also, his choice of words goes very well with the theme. “I looked at the boy, who was silently watching his fly, and it was my hands that held his rod, my eyes watching. I felt dizzy and didn’t know which rod I was at the end of.” (5th Paragraph, Once More to the Lake) The wording in these sentences help contribute to the theme of Annihilating Time a lot. He says he felt “dizzy” and “didn’t know which end of the rod I was on”. The man is thinking a lot about his son. He stares at him forgetting what is going on with everything else. Once he was done looking at his son he felt dizzy and forgot everything that
happened. I felt that when the word “dizzy” came in, it showed how he was totally lost and out of whack when he stopped staring at his son. He forgot whose rod he was holding. The diction in both texts, show the common theme of Annihilated Time equally. In Conclusion, the story “Once More to the Lake” by E.B. White and the poem “Forgetfulness” by Billy Collins both use syntax and diction to develop their common theme of Annihilated Time. Since both pieces had common themes, they needed to have similar writing techniques. If the theme wasn’t common then both pieces, in the way the author’s write, would be so much different. Theme plays a huge role in how a story or poem is written. If the theme is common the stories will be alike. If the theme isn’t common then they will be written very different.
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Written as part of a short story collection, author T. Coraghessan Boyle’s “Greasy Lake” presents itself as a climactic account of one night in a less than savory young man’s life. Upon closer inspection “Greasy Lake” reveals a complex series of foreboding events that incorporate the innocence and ignorance males have when presented with different social scenarios and the female gender. Through his masterful use of the protagonists internal dialogue, Boyle’s artistry shows an evolving dynamic of indifference, aggression, and intimidation towards and by the women of “Greasy Lake”.
Initially, Elisabeth is the matriarch of the four generations of women talked about in the story. Elisabeth works in the house, but she’s married to a field slave and has three daughters. Not much insight is given on Elisabeth and her feelings, yet through the narration it is as if she lived vicariously through her youngest daughter, Suzette: “It was as if her mother were the one who had just had her first communion not Suzette” (20) Even though Elisabeth too worked in the house, Suzette had more privileges than her mother and the other slaves. Elisabeth represented the strength and the pride of her people: “You have a mother and a father both, and they don’t live up to the [plantation] house” (25). She would constantly remind Suzette of her real family, which signifies the remembrance of a history of people and their roots. It is up to Suzette to keep the heritage even through the latter miscegenation of the generations to come.
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“Greasy Lake” by T.C. Boyles tells a story about a group of young adults looking for their chance to be proclaimed “tough guys”. The young adults get their mom’s car and decide to go out to the place called “Greasy Lake”. The lake that use to be a clean lake, was now a hangout place for young adults. The boys had some liquor, pot, and a mission to complete. They were destined to be them crazy “bad guys”. Needless to say their night ends up being a learning experience and the come home different people. Most young adults have to learn some lessons the hard way. Almost, all situations in life are learned by someone’s trial and error. The “Greasy Lake” is a story whose symbols support the main theme: the lake itself represents the boy’s character, losing the keys represent them losing their innocence, and Al’s body represented the results of being “bad guys”.
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The book Lives on the Boundary, written by Mike Rose, provides great insight to what the new teaching professional may anticipate in the classroom. This book may be used to inform a teacher’s philosophy and may render the teacher more effective. Lives on the Boundary is a first person account composed of eight chapters each of which treat a different obstacle faced by Mike Rose in his years as a student and as an educator. More specifically in chapters one through five Mike Rose focuses on his own personal struggles and achievements as a student. Ultimately the aim is to highlight the underpreparedness of some of today’s learners.
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Within the essay “Once More to the Lake”, E.B. notes that “I bought myself a couple of bass hooks… returned to the lake… to revisit old haunts… When the others went swimming my son said he was going in… As he buckled the swollen belt, suddenly my groin left the chill of death (White 464). The essay “Once More to the Lake” brings a significant amount of attention towards the author’s attempt to secure personal satisfaction. It becomes quite obvious in the first few paragraphs, that the main character is on this vacation with his son, to recreate the careless feeling he use to have while vacationing with his dad as a child. Even though E.B. does not come out clearly and say it, the author is chasing some type of nostalgic feeling he clearly needs to feel better about life. On each page, White uses comparison and contrast to explain to the reader how the trip resembles the one he use to experience with his dad. By the end of the reading, the father begins to realize his vacation trip with his son will never be the same as the one he has dreamt about. He is no longer a child who can only notice the positive components of life. At this point, the father is an adult who will never have the innocence he once clung too. It takes some reflection for him to finally realize his place as a father in the situation. Comparison and contrast displays the idea that even though everything may look the same, it does not mean it feels the same. This mode rhetoric reflects back to the theme at the end of essay, as it concludes the author’s failed attempt to find some satisfaction from the
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