My Mistakes In My Writing Analysis

Since my schooling began at a young age, a lack of attention has always been my downfall. I quickly become discouraged, and uninterested; when faced with criticism ,or a lack of positive feedback. The errors in my paper exist for many reasons, my lack of attention being the most important. I do not feel a book or online resource will be a sufficient tool to help me better my writing. Sadly, this is not the way I learn or retain information. Therefor i will not riddle this paper with lies about intentions that do not exist. However improvements must be made and notes must be taken.

Over the course of my paper i recieved many deductions for several easily fixable mistakes. Mainly my mistakes consisted of comma placement failures, poor word choice, failure to spell out numbers, and formatting. All of which could have been seen and easily corrected with a focused eye. The mistakes listed above are

I do believe i am a strong writer, and i have good ideas to share. However, Ive made a habit out of rushing projects through the door, just to get them off of my plate. I plant to take more time reading through my work, and allow an educated mind to help with revisions. This will ensure that the small easily fixable mistakes, do not make it to the final draft.

During peer revisions, i felt a lack of care from my reviewer. There were very few marks put on my paper, and most were not mistakes at all. My reviewer wanted to get my paper done and over with. This is not to say my grade is his/her responsibility, but i do feel a lack of support within my group. As a reviewer I gave my groups paper's the attention i should have given my own. I read through every sentence, every paragraph, and explained face to face , how they could make it better or when sense was not being made. I received no such help from anyone, for i had not asked for further review outside my own