Literary Techniques in Gwendolyn Bennett’s “Hatred” and Jean Toomer’s “Carma”

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Gwendolyn Bennett and Jean Toomer approach the use of violence in their writing from two opposite angles. In Bennett’s poem “Hatred”, this violence is explicitly stated against white people and the institution of racism. Toomer, on the other hand, employs this violence in a domestic context. Both poems make use of images of weapons and elements of nature. These images reconcile two completely different works of literature by establishing them firmly within the culture of the American South.
In the first section of “Hatred”, Bennett writes, “I shall hate you/Like a dart of singing steel/Shot through still air/At eventide” (Bennett 223). These lines evoke the image and sound of a gunshot. The reader has no context for the identity of the object of Bennett’s hatred; however, it is a hatred that is so strong that she is tempted to kill. This image also departs from other descriptions of women in literature, if the reader assumes that the voice in this poem is either that of Bennett or of another woman. The speaker in this poem has an uncommon strength and boldness; she is unafraid to commit an act of violence for which she will receive severe repercussions, such as lynching. However, she cannot act out her desires, so she resolves to hate. She wants to hate the white people so that her hatred hurts them. She cannot kill them; therefore she must fulfill her violent desires in the most satisfactory way possible.
Bennett continues: “Or solemnly/As pines are sober/When they stand etched/Against the sky” (Bennett 223). These lines give the reader an opposite sense of the speaker’s emotion. While in the first four lines, the speaker was militant and wanted so desperately to kill, in these lines, the reader sees a calmer, more refi...

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The instances of violence in these passages are reactions to the conditions of everyday black life. In Gwendolyn Bennett’s poem “Hatred,” she addresses the suppressed anger and hatred that the speaker, who undoubtedly speaks for much of the black population, wishes to be able to express through violence, but is barred from such reactionary behavior because of the construction of American society. In Jean Toomer’s short prose passage “Carma” the violence is in a domestic context. Bane’s murder of the man in the search party occurs because he believes that he slept with his wife Carma. The use of elements of nature is also approached differently, especially that of pine. While Bennett refers to pine trees as a symbol of upstanding pride and dignity, Toomer sees the pine needles for what they are—pine needles, but an important part of the Southern identity.

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