Joshua Bennett Syntax

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Since the 1990s, autism diagnoses have been on a rather rapid incline. With that being the case, more and more people have been growing up with diagnosed siblings, parental figures, etc. Though despite how common it is, it is still seen as an oddity. Two presentations from two people, Faith Jegede and Joshua Bennett ("What I've Learned from My Autistic Brothers" and "Levi"), open our eyes to the world of Autism. Both made powerful speeches with genuine care behind them. However, only one presented one that felt far more compelling- Joshua Bennett. Through not only his appearance and way of speaking, but his diction/syntax, and use of rhetoric. From the start, Joshua Bennett presents himself in a very pleasant way: casually yet formally dressed …show more content…

He begins his speech with a historical anecdote; "In 1851, a physician named Dr. Samuel Cartwrite coined the term "drapetomania"". When opening with a statement like that, it gives the audience an idea that you are knowledgeable and have done your research before getting up on stage- unlike Faith who opened up with "Today I have just one request." Please don't tell me I'm normal." While just as impactful due to it creating a possible connection with the audience, it isn't as strong as a historical anecdote may be. Though a historical anecdote isn't the only rhetorical device Joshua uses, he also brings up a rhetorical question. A question that gets the crowd thinking. When did the brain become an appliance? With these two rhetorical devices, and many others, Joshua Bennett shares this all through a strong and descriptive piece of slam poetry. A poem dedicated to his little brother, …show more content…

Joshua mainly sticks with Pathos, though he also provides logos through the use of occasional facts (Ex- the mention of Dr. Samuel C). His pathos is the strongest point in his poem and presentation of it. He isn't afraid to show emotion throughout. Joshua makes use of strong wording and comparisons; "Levi, they will come for you too." and "Turning our children into chattel- and our schools into asylums where we medicate based on myth" to name a few. Using strong lines like these in slam poetry is so much more potent and moving than just telling a story like Faith J did. There is also his use of logos, bringing up cases of mistreatment towards autistic children- "Christopher Baker, a boy from Lexington, Kentucky—his teacher stuffed him in a duffel bag and left him there for twenty minutes." Or his mention of a later neurologist that coined the term autism while using an analogy- "Ten years ago, a neurologist cast the word “autism” like a giant fishing net over his

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