Hillary Clinton Persuasive Essay

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I believe Hillary Clinton won the first presidential debate. Donald Trump behaved defensively throughout the night. Instead of answering the questions Lester Holt asked and improving his public image, he was more focused on criticizing Hillary Clinton. Donald Trump also was not prepared and did not fully research the plans he talked about, while Hillary had research backing up her plans and research backing up the failure of Donald Trump’s plans. During the first segment, both candidates discussed their tax plans. Donald Trump said his plan would increase employment by reducing taxes for businesses. Trump said “I will be reducing taxes tremendously from thirty five percent to fifteen percent for companies, small and big businesses. That's …show more content…

She said the plan would only benefit the wealthy people and would be a disaster for the economy. Trumped up trickle down is what she called his plan. Experts on the fact checker said his plan would decrease federal revenue, therefore increasing our debt. Clinton also said “ That’s why I said new jobs, with rising incomes, investments, not in more tax cuts that would add five trillion dollars to the debt.” (NPR staff). To that Donald Trump replied with denying Hillary Clinton had a tax plan multiple time, even though she was discussing her well thought out plan before he started saying that. He said “But you have no plan.” and “Secretary, you have no plan.” (NPR staff), which made no sense and causing him to devalue his opinions. He made himself look unprepared by criticising and interrupting Clinton, rather than defending and explaining why his plan was better. Clinton was prepared in every way, while Trump tried to insult her and in order to divert attention from his plan. She behaved well and smiled instead of yelling relevant information, like when Trump brought up the deleted email because he ran out of educated thing to say. Tim Alberta with the National Review agreed that Trump was unprepared

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