Fencing Persuasive Essay Topics

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Fencing: should this sport still be included in the Olympics? This writer does not think so.

Thesis: Fencing is an elitist sport that should not be included in the Olympics

Outline:

Fencing reflects outdated ideas that are exclusively for the rich
Fencing is an expensive sport
Fencing is only popular in first world countries
“En garde, pret allez… touche!” These are just some of the foreign utterances that you will hear in one of the most elitist Olympic sports, fencing. Originally conceived as a “gentleman’s game,” this contest has entrenched itself in Olympic tradition while other, more popular sports have languished in the garbage bin of the IOC (International Olympic Committee). Because of its inherent elitist nature, fencing should lunge its way out of the world stage. …show more content…

From his book Sword and Masque, world-renowned teacher Julius Palffy-Alpar writes that “fencing [is] a great art which raises men to Knights in their thoughts and behavior.” As this quote obviously denotes class divisions, it is also true that this sport was dominated by male aristocrats who prepared for duels. US Olympian Ed Vebell says that we shouldn’t think of “fencing in terms of a swashbuckling hero dispatching a whole platoon of guards centuries ago.” However, based on its origins from Catholic Monarchs and Spanish Conquistadors, this sport fits this idea. Today, the list of countries participating in Olympic fencing resembles a roster of first world

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