Draft Essay For Nursing

1074 Words3 Pages

First, I would like to tell you that your draft is a great source of inspiration. As a mother, as a working student, and as a woman over forty I can tell you that the conclusion of your essay inspired me deeply and convinced me that in life "slow and steady wins the race." Like you, I study between washing dishes and ironing clothes. Thank you for sharing your emotions and your story with me and the rest of the class. After having read the conclusion of your draft, I feel less alone in this crazy journey.

You wrote your first draft with passion and attention to your audience. The draft consists of questions and answers and it introduces the readers, with professionalism, to the nursing field. In addition, the draft is a personal journey …show more content…

Did your parents know the level of education For That nurse? Probably not. Do you care? “The strength of your essay is precisely to soothe the fears of the reader related to an unknown field. How can you reassure and at the same time inform the reader? Think about how you treat your patients and I believe you will find the key to write an essay that informs but also reassures the patient and motivates other people who want to pursue higher education—not only in the nursing field but also in other fields.

In your introduction, you might want to have a main question from which t derive all the questions already present in your draft. For example,

How is nursing education Affecting nurses and the public?

In this question, you consider the salary, the differences among education programs, the social issues, and the gender issues of your profession, the physical and psychological challenges of your profession. I found a link that you might want to check for additional reflections to add to your research http://www.aacn.nche.edu/media-relations/EdImpact.pdf

Below are my answers to the peer review questions,

How important do you think this draft’s work is to the community of scholars …show more content…

The draft is directed not only to the community of nurses but also to public. It is a very important draft because it considers social issues, gender issues and the physical and psychological challenges of a profession that is too often taken for granted. The draft addresses important themes such as gender disparities, pay equity, discrimination related to gender and age factors, and the psychological and physical conditions of the

More about Draft Essay For Nursing

Open Document