Creative Writing: Dragon's Mistake

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Jade is awake but is still and has her eyes closed. Her head is in a burning, aching sensation. Jade tries to opens her eyes but can’t because of her headache. So instead, she feels around to try and understand what she is laying on. The feeling she gets is a feeling of damp grass. While she is feeling around she feels something hard and rough. She moves her hand up the object and feels hair. Not soft hair like a bunny, but rough and stiff hair, almost like a horse. After feeling around for a little bit, Jade realizes that she is feeling the part deer, bird, thingy. She opens her eyes with no pain and sees the huge deer kneeling over her. She also notices that her backpack is stuck on its antlers. “So you did take my backpack!!,” she told …show more content…

I guess that says you are curious. Anyway, the last clue said to find a place with birds chirping, and deer frolicking, look around, you have found the place! Congrats!!! For your lucky find, here is your next clue. Small, round, and has tricks up his sleeve. Find this fellow stump to receive, clue …show more content…

Never heard of those before.” Trix then stomps her hoof and the familiar blinding white light appeared. When the light fades, Jade sees a little brick red fox. Jade smiles because foxes are her favorite animals. “Okay, back to business,” She then takes the note and rereads it like, six times just to get it in her head. “What in the world does this mean?,” Jade was clueless on this clue, “It must be talking about a man, but then it says stump, I’m so confused!!” She doesn’t know what clue is talking about, but maybe Trix does. “Trix, is there any possible way you can morph into a map that talks?,’’ Trix looks doubtful, but begins trying to morph. You can tell by the deep, thoughtful look on her little fox face. She looks up at Jade, with a look of sadness. “It’s okay Trix at least you-,” Jade got cut off by the familiar blinding light, but this time it made it sound that sounded like someone was slowly, scraping their nails against a chalkboard. Jade covers her ears and tries to stop the sound from getting to her, but the sound it to strong. The deafening sound FINALLY fades, and in front of Jade lays a

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