Creative Writing: An Inspector Calls

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It was the night of May 5, 2014, and my wife, Maria, and I were sound asleep in bed. Around 2:00am we were awakened by a loud knocking at our front door and a ringing of the doorbell. We were immediately up and alert, we knew it couldn’t be good. The last time we were awakened this way our son, Remington, had flipped his car just two miles down the road we live on. He was badly shaken but only slightly hurt. I feared it was him and it might be worse this time. We opened the door and two deputies were at the door just like last time. But this time we knew it was worse, there was a civilian standing with them. In a somber voice one of the deputies asked if they could come in. I am not sure what we said, my mind was racing back and forth between …show more content…

We knew she was never coming back to us. We knew we would be going to see her, one day. It was at that point I kept hearing a whisper—not in my head, but a real whisper, “the prisoners are listening.” We walked out of the room. As far as I was concerned that was it. I was not interested in a funeral. I was not interested in friends, family or anyone. I wanted to go home. I didn’t want to be bothered. I wanted to be alone with my wife and together find meaning and understand what had just happened. As we drove back home we talked. What comes next? Maria thought she would go into to work that day, I entertained the thought briefly, “That would be all right, maybe I will too.” Then reality came back and I said that it would not be a good idea. People would think we are freaks or something. No, let’s take the day off and process all that happened. We talked about whom to call first. We decided I would call my family first and then she would call her’s. Out of courtesy, we thought we would wait until daybreak, but as we sat in the dark with the television on. The morning news stations were already talking about it! A surge of anger swept over both of …show more content…

We didn’t know what was going to happen yet but we knew that we did not want this to be a sad occasion. That we were terribly torn by this tragedy there is no doubt, but it is my belief that the Holy Spirit came over us, comforted us, and guided us. I can say that with hindsight. Another blessing was Kaylynn. I single her out because she was Sterling’s comforter, she was Sterling’s big sister after the loss of his big sister. Maria and I had our own struggles that day and it was easy to overlook the pain our two son’s were experiencing through it all. Sterling’s Sunday School teacher, Ryan, came by and was a friend to Sterling. Our church, as a whole, was a great source of comfort. Our countertops were overflowing with food brought by the church members and The Loveless Cafe. My mind kept recalling the scripture Jeremiah 33:3 “Call on me and I will answer you, and show you great and wonderful things which you do not know.” The rest of the week was filled with sadness mixed with celebration. Our Lord sustained us with His spirit, a loving family, and warmhearted friends. And God whispered, “the other prisoners are

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