Creative Writing: A Humorous Wedding

It was nearly 4:30 in the evening, when the two cousins returned home. First thing Azlaan wanted to do was to inform Shifa that he was back, so he rushed towards the stairs, and saw Iffat bi coming downstairs, carrying a tray with half empty containers.
'Everything all right?' He asked skeptically.
She smiled and said, 'Everything is on schedule and Chote sahib I have transferred all your required belongings in the downstairs bedroom for the evening, you don't need to come upstairs.'
'I just want to check on Shifa, and then I will get ready.' Azlaan started ascending the stairs, but was blocked by his housekeeper.
'No, you can't see the bride before the wedding, it is considered bad omen.' She looked at him with a disapproving glance.
Somewhat

He had to find another way to inform Shifa. He came downstairs to find Qasim struggling with couple of bags.

Qasim looked at Azlaan's expression and said, 'You look annoyed, did Shifa also ran away?'
Azlaan stared at him insolently, then started walking from one corner to another, trying to calm himself.

'Ok that was uncalled for, but why are you pacing the room like a caged lion?' Qasim was unable to understand his restlessness. Azlaan has been meticulous about all the details regarding the Nikkah ceremony. Elders were invited, sweets were ordered, and courtyard was completely transformed in to a beautiful seating area with the appropriate decoration. And the most difficult task of all, which was to convince the inflexible Molvi sahib to come in the evening to perform the nikkah on short notice was also successfully achieved. Now what was troubling his bullheaded

'So go talk to her, what is the big deal.' Qasim couldn't see the logic behind his agitation.
Exasperated by his cousin's slow wittedness he said, 'The big deal is that I am not allowed to see her before the wedding.'
'Oh' finally Qasim understood the whole dilemma.
'If you want, I can give her the message. As it is I have to give these stuff to Shanoo anyway.' Pointing towards the bag containing Shanoo's outfit and jewelry.
'But you can't see the bride before the wedding, it's considered bad omen.' Azlaan was losing his patience.
Qasim started laughing, and Azlaan looked at him as if he had lost his mind.
'This applies only for the groom, you fool, not for the entire world.'
Frowning, and getting irritated at himself for missing this pertinent information, he growled at Qasim,
'In that case, stop guffawing and go, I am sure she must be getting worried by now.'
'Whatever you say, your highness!' Saying that he left the