Comparing Tobogganing To Essay Writing

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Negative three degrees celsius is the perfect weather for a perfect snowfall; a snowfall that would start the beginning of a long thought process of what should I do over Christmas break. I woke the night of the snowfall and the wind was blowing the snow back and forth. I jumped up and down with excitement as I watch each and every individual snowflake hit my window ledge, the excitement grew from the tips of my toes to the end of my nose. I could not wait until morning. At ten in the morning I called my friend Celina and we talked and discussed what we were going to do later that afternoon. With each plan we came up with the decision became harder, we thought of building a snowman, having a snowball fight, going skiing, or going tobogganing; …show more content…

You may ask yourself what is the comparison? You may think there is none… But there is! There are many parallels when comparing tobogganing to essay writing, like: the hard start. Writing an essay isn’t always easy, choosing a topic and coming up with a thesis statement is like being knee deep in snow, climbing up a hill. Both things are hard to do and may require some help. Essay writing isn’t always fun and games, there are many challenging aspects to writing an essay that resemble sliding down the side of a hill. Speed, bumps, and steepness all relate to an essay. The speed of the toboggan, is the speed of the penmanship, depending on how fast you writing the faster you’ll be done, just like the faster to go down the hill the faster you’ll reach the bottom. The bumps are the way you write, whether or not the ride will be smooth or bumpy. The more bumps the harder it is to move the toboggan; the bumps in writing are writers block, a lack of information, and a lack of passion; each decreases the value in progress and fun. The steepness is the passion, the speed, and the purpose; the steeper the hill the faster you’ll going. The steepness can be measured in passion and purpose, the more you have the steeper it is meaning the easier it is to

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