Commentary on My Storyboard

Commentary on My Storyboard

My ten scenes have to show the way that Jane is badly treated and the

audience should sympathize with Jane. To show this in all my shots I

have made Jane look small in all her scenes to show that she is

hopeless, sad and miserable in her environment. To create this

depression I also made the other characters look down at Jane, to show

that Jane was treated below characters like Mrs. Reed and her son John

Reed. This also should make the audience notice that Jane was being

treated badly and below the rest of the family. I want the audience to

see Mrs. Reed as an arrogant, disdainful and a bossy and evil type of

character. To do this I have made her have a shadow behind her in all

her scenes by back light this gives her an evil look. This would also

make her look bigger than everyone else and look down on Jane gives

Mrs. Reed an arrogant and bossy look it also makes her as in charge of

the house. Everything done in the house is with her command.

Similarly I wanted Mrs. Reed’s son Jack reed to be seen by the

audience as a fat, nasty and horrible and boastful boy and also

arrogant and proud like his mother. To show all this, I have made him

looking down at Jane. I have also made him look bigger than Jane that

shows he is more powerful as in the novel. I have made Miss Abbot also

against Jane by making her tell Jane off. These are all the things

that should make the audience agree that Jane is being badly treated.

I have made the maid Bessie as caring and loving women. I have made

her so that she sympathizes with Jane and understands Jane. To do this

I have made her beside Jane and I have tried to give her a nice and

pleasant personality. I have always made her the same level as Jane,

never high or below to give a friendly relationship between Jane and