College Admissions Essay: What Makes Me Who I Am

Anyone who has every really hung out with me or has known me will tell you that I am actually a very humble person and I really mind my own business unless something involves me, then I go and take action into the situation. I don’t really like to shine I like to stay back and and follow up bigger and better than most. I like to advance psychological form so then I can better others with my superior mind set. I sometimes act and seem as if I do not know much or as if I am not as intelligent as I seem. I very much only do so to hide my true potential so then once I unleash it I leave them flabbergasted and put them at a very low disadvantage. Most people see me and just don’t even think twice about gazing their eye upon me and ponder about who

Given the chance I can easily surprise others and show them how mentally enhanced I am compared to them. Now you’re probably reading this and thinking “ oh this kid is dumb he doesn’t know what he is talking about” but see that’s where you are wrong I have taught myself how to disassemble a whole computer and put it back together again without having any errors, I have educated myself on the philosophy of life and have questioned many things about religion and some of nature’s ways leaving those who I have shared with in aw. Anyone of my family members will tell you I am very intelligent and that they can not even think of how far I can actually enhance my mind. No one really expects much from me because I’m just some mexican from Mexico. A lot has happened in my life to shape and make me into the person I am today, most of it is rather sad and depressing, but I don’t really let it hold me down. My life has really been a roller coaster ride but more like those roller coasters that go extremely high up and then go straight down on a very steep rail plummeting toward the ground at a very speed to where you really do think you’re gonna