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Veyne, Paul. "Pleasure and Excesses in the Roman Empire." The Roman Empire Cambridge, Mass.: Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, 1997. 101-116.
When people think of Roman culture, they see the violence, the lust, and betrayal of one another. This perception is due to the influence novels and movies and televisions shows depicting such actions. However, like most revolving around the past there is more to cultures of the Roman people. To prove that Rome’s culture is not how it seems, historian Paul Veyne published “Pleasure and Excess in Roman Empire” to explain to the audience more about the culture they are not fully aware of in the article. But how well does Veyne’s explanation in his book hold any weight and do explain these facts rather well?
At a first glance of the story Veyne seems to organize his topic paragraphs topically and breaks them down before moving to the next subject much like a formal essay. For example in his first paragraph to his second, Veyne writes about the same topic but turned into different subcategories. The only sources that Veyne uses are from his own book “Pleasure and Excesses in the Roman Empire” as seen on the top of the page. Since the information comes from Veyne’s own knowledge, which would make everything he’s writing about questionable. However since he was able to get the book published by such a highly regarded institute such as Harvard University, there is a high amount of trust that his claims are true. There was a bibliography in the first page and as for footnotes there were many. The footnotes were very helpful especially since there are many unfamiliar words and historical figures could be unknown to the reader.
The author of this article, Paul Veyne , a French historian ...

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...the question to ask one’s self is if Paul Veyne’s writing style and readability in the article help or hinder it. The first impression of his style of writing beginning decently in his introduction and was especially helped when he used a quote. This helps getting the reader’s attention up and makes them look forward to reading the onward. Veyne’s body paragraphs however are kind of messy. On the positive side they display the information needed each of his topic nicely but they are transitioned into feels off-putting. His conclusion is decent but at the same time it feels like he’s going to another topic. So the question still remains, does Veyne’s style of writing suitable enough to prove his point? Well, if he changes the structure of his paragraph to make them move more fluidly, then Veyne’s paper would be an excellent read, but for now it’s only decent at best.

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