Analysis Of Why I Left The Church By Richard Garcia

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Why I Left the Church” by Richard Garcia is a poem that explores the ongoing and conflicting relationship between a child’s fantasy and the Church. Although the majority of the text is told in present tense, readers are put through the lenses of a young boy who contemplates the legitimacy of the restricting and constricting nature of worship. It is a narrative that mixes a realist approach of storytelling with a fantasy twist that goes from literal metaphors to figurative metaphors in the description of why the narrator left the church. The poet presents the issue of childhood innocence and preset mindsets created by the Church using strong metaphors and imagery that appeal to all the senses. The poem is written in free verse with no rhyme …show more content…

“Maybe it was / because the only time / I hit a baseball / it smashed the neon cross / on the church across / the street” (1-6). The readers are clearly presented with a scene of a boy playing baseball and accidentally breaking a church cross. The boy then explores and toys with the possible divine consequences for accidentally breaking a cross with a baseball. “Maybe it was the demon-stoked / rotisseries of purgatory / where we would roast / hundreds of years / for the smallest of sins” (11-15). Here the poet effectively uses imagery to show the reader how a child’s imagination may perceive hell. This may also show the impressionability of the Church on a freethinking child and how the combination can be profound on a young boy with internal conflicts. This can also apply to children’s fantasies and their carefree attitudes which allows them to blend what mindsets they were forced into with that of their …show more content…

The following lines also give us a better look into the boy’s imaginative possibilities. “I wore my space helmet / to catechism?” (17, 18). “Sister Mary Bernadette / pointed towards the door / and said, “Out! Come back / when you’re ready.”(21-24) and from this point it is a fantastical retelling of the boy floating up through the roof of the church and escaping the church. Perhaps he left the church because he wasn’t allowed to wear his space helmet. And that might be his reasoning. But it was all a grand metaphor with the space helmet being his imagination and spirit and the Church not being the best place for him to express that. The poet again explores the conflict between an innocent free-thinking childhood and the restriction of

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