Analysis Of Overloaded And Underprepared By Frank Bruni

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In Frank Bruni’s response to “Overloaded and Underprepared,” he discusses the expectations of many high school students throughout their career which people view as a “perfect society.” Today, society has high expectations of high school students, which causes students to become stressed due to extracurriculars, jobs, and other organizations they are involved in. Throughout the response, Bruni shows disappointment because of the lack of sleep students receive each night and the stimulants students use to fulfill their goals which helps Bruni get his main idea across effectively. Frank Bruni discusses the perfect society that is expected from many students today and used evidence to explain his main idea clearly and effectively. Everyone wants …show more content…

Generally, grades begin to drop since students do not have time to finish homework, but some students have their minds’ set to achieve perfect grades so they sacrifice sleep and begin to gain more stress. In Bruni’s response, he states, “Sleep deprivation is just a part of the craziness, but it’s a perfect shorthand for childhoods bereft of spontaneity, stripped of real play and haunted by the ‘pressure of perfection.’” Students are so competitive with their grades in today’s society they do not realize how they do not have to be perfect to succeed in life. From experience, I know how competitive students become when dealing with grades, ACT scores, and top ten percent. Although these students are competitive, they show commitment by working hard and never giving …show more content…

When students become depressed, they may use stimulants to get their minds off studies they need to focus on which will endanger mental and physical health even more than just being sleep deprived. If students are not in the correct state of mind, they might assume drugs or alcohol will cure the mental pain they are in because of the amount of stress they have. Unfortunately, alcohol, adderall, and other drugs are commonly used among students who believe they need an extra boost to perform to the best of their ability, so they think these stimulants are the only way to help them accomplish the goals they wish to obtain. If students are intoxicated or on drugs, this could play a role in suicide because these individuals do not understand how much harm they are doing to their

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