Thesis On The Relationship Between Canada And The First Nations People

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General Introductory Statement to introduce topic:
Humans are capable of fixing relationship, even if their history involved cruel actions towards a group or person.
Specific Introductory Statement (links topic to central idea):
The relationship between the Canadian government and the Indigenous community has significantly improved through the betterment of their quality of their lives, the updated laws surrounding the way new treaties are being created and their culture and beliefs being recognized and accepted.
Thesis Statement: The relationship between the Government of Canada and the First Nations People of Canada have significantly improved, grown and changed since 1982.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Topic Sentence (argument 1): Firstly, the relationship …show more content…

Marshall, Tabitha. “Kelowna Accord.” The Canadian Encyclopedia, www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/kelowna-accord/b. Government of Canada; Indigenous and Northern Affairs Canada. “ARCHIVED - Sustaining Momentum: The Government of Canada's Fourth and Final Report in Response to the Kelowna Accord Implementation Act 2011-12.” Government of Canada; Indigenous and Northern Affairs Canada, 28 May 2012, …show more content…

** Add up to 3 pieces of evidence/quotations , plus analysis after each.
Point #2: Furthermore, the crown is now accountable and responsible for the modern treaties and its overall obligations.
Evidence/Quotation #2: “The Crown in right of Canada is accountable for the decisions and actions taken to implement its obligations therein as laid out in the treaty.” Government of Canada; Indigenous and Northern Affairs Canada. “Statement of Principles on the Federal Approach to Modern Treaty Implementation.” Government of Canada; Indigenous and Northern Affairs Canada, 13 July 2015, www.aadnc-aandc.gc.ca/eng/1436288286602/1436288386227.
Analysis of Proof: This shows how the government will be held responsible and accountable surrounding these treaties and that the first nation community can’t be taken advantage of as they had been in the past.
Concluding sentence/transition: Ultimately, the new legislations that outlines how the modern day treaties between the Indigenous community and the Canadian government has helped amend the wrong doing that the government has done in the past and make sure it is never

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