The Art of Diction in Anne Sexton's Music Swims Back to Me

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Diction is defined as the choice of words or the vocabulary in a poem or story. In Anne Sexton's masterpiece "Music Swims Back to Me", Sexton uses diction to her advantage to entice the reader and create visual images to convey a message. Her word choice uncovers hidden meanings of words and phrases to tell what it was like for her to be institutionalized. Sexton's choice of a dark tone adds another element to the poem.

Anne Sexton's diction breathes life into "Music Swims Back to Me" because her use of words with double meanings and certain subliminal thoughts of the way words sound. The phrase, "Oh, la la la, the music swims back to me" not only has a musical quality, it also renders elusive thoughts. Sexton's use of "oh, la la la" allows the poem to flow on giving it a poetic rhythm and can trigger thoughts of a psychotic person (la la...looney bin). Anne Sexton is able to use an eluded symbolism in the line "It was the strangled cold of November; / even the stars were strapped in the sky." If one ponders the thought and the setting of the poem, one will realize her choice of words, is supposed to be describing herself being strapped in a straight jacket, as she would have been when she entered mental institutions numerous times.

In "Music Swims Back to Me" Anne Sexton is able to put forth symbolism with her concrete diction and wording of phrases. Lines four to seven read, "There are no sign posts in this room, four ladies over eighty in diapers every one of them. / la la la, oh music swims back to me." In this grouping or phrase of sorts, by selecting word carefully and with placement such as, "four ladies over eighty / in diapers every one of them." Sexton is able to put across a message. In this ca...

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...he music swims back to me. / The night I came and danced in a circle." Her diction shows that she is remembering the night she entered the institution, and that she wasn't afraid. The use of, "danced in a circle" professes that on the night she came, not only was she not afraid, but she was in a distorted state of mind and mentally spun.

"Music Swims Back to Me" by Anne Sexton truly does show the literary talents of an astounding woman of her caliber. It is a perfect example of how such a simple thing as one word can change the effect and make a world of difference in a poem like this. Anne Sexton masters symbolism in her diction and is able to draw great visual images in the reader's mind with her strange tone and style. Without Anne's excellent structure in poem and rhythmic quality, this poem would fall apart, and simply be a work of nonsense prose.

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