Short Story: Doubt My Story

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Many chilling stories happened a long time ago. Not this one. This one took place just over a year ago. Doubt my story? Don’t. I’m the one who was in it… I remember clear as yesterday the new, sleek white touring bus whirring into a deserted parking lot. A 30-year-old tower shot up from the ground. It was mustard-yellow, dirty and the off-white gutters were smothered in mucky mildew. Ivy crept along one wall, and the moon was a crescent. When I was younger, I had a nightmare about a hotel. Every time, even when I was older, I would make sure no room looked like the one in my room. And I would always, always refuse to sleep by the window and the radiator. We were loading off of the bus. We would only stay in this hotel for part of our choir …show more content…

All was well. Well, unless you count the creepy old woman glaring at me from the welcome desk. She wasn’t really that welcoming. I pushed the up button on the elevator, and a tattooed man in a black, torn wrestler’s tank-top smiled at me. He was missing several teeth. Piercing were lobed in his ear, nose, eyebrow, lip, and basically everywhere possible. The majority of his hair was a dark buzz-cut, but the center was gelled up in black oily spikes. We got in the elevator, and it rumbled up to the second story. I read my key-card. I would be in room 223. The room looked like the one in my dream so many years ago. I gasped.

My two roommates were already there. My third one was out getting ice. As soon as I saw the room, I begged to have the bed furthest from the window, but my two roommates refused. I didn’t tell them about the dream. How could I? They would’ve thought I was insane. Instead, I warned them that they didn’t know what they’d done. My friend was already sleeping by the bedside table because of her glasses, so I had to sleep by the radiator. And the window. Everything I had worked four years for, avoiding every hotel room, had been all for nothing. The beginning of my dream had already come true. All the way up to …show more content…

The lights were on. The phone was unplugged. The radio was unplugged. The radiator was unplugged. So was the T.V. Only the lights were plugged in. I whispered with my friends until about 4:00 in the morning, considerably calmer. The phone rang. Stupidly, I picked up. “Hello?” I called. “I’m coming for you.” The events began to unravel again, similar but worse than the time before when only I could know what was happening. The girl wanted all of us now. The lights turned off, the air grew chill, the phones rang, classical music switched on, the radiator made noise, and the little girl was coming out from behind the curtain. Slowly she emerged. My friends’ eyes were wide. “You were right!” one shouted. One threw up. Her knife was glittering in the moonlight. She raised it and I felt the suspense dragging me down. I felt the icy cold blade hit my stomach and felt a warm sensation. Blackness. That’s all I saw. Pure plain

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