Rimbaud's Metamorphosis

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‘Vénus Anadyomène’ is a fourteen line sonnet, made up of two quatrains and two tercets, written by Arthur Rimbaud towards the end of 1870. He gives his interpretation of the eponymous painting which portrays Venus rising from the sea. Rimbaud aimed to confront the quotidian forms of alienation: repetitiveness, apathy and boredom. To this end, obfuscation would become key to his poetic strategy along with allegorical descriptions, bursting with loathing for conventionalism and inertia . Despite Rimbaud providing the conventional, beautiful representation of the goddess in "Invocation to Venus" and "Sun and flesh,” ‘Venus Anadyomene’ is a complete contrast. Rimbaud depicts a disfigurement of Venus, and hastens the re-figuring of the aesthetically …show more content…

The synesthesia at the end of line nine, ‘le tout sent un goût’ was a common technique used by Rimbaud. Obfuscation is created through confusion of the senses and thus it seems only fitting that the following line begins with perhaps an equally obscure oxymoron in ‘Horrible étrangement’. The ambiguity this creates seems to alienate and further diminish Venus. Moreover, the obscurity of the image created by synesthesia and this emphatically placed oxymoron is paralleled by the apparent ease at which the poem continues to flow, demonstrated by the enjambment from lines nine to ten and the elision of the almost euphonic ‘horrible étrangement;’. By creating this obfuscation through his use of language and interpreting it seemingly effortlessly, perhaps Rimbaud is trying to highlight the flaws in modern-day thinking and encourage a transition towards modernism and his own style of thinking. The powerful word choice of ‘Des singularités’, made even more cogent by the enjambment, presents further criticism of the goddess which is made even more malevolent through the use of sibilance. We can picture the scornful tones of Rimbaud upon reading this phrase, therefore strengthening the impact of his view. Rimbaud ends the stanza with the phrase ‘il faut voir à la loupe…’. The ellipsis is effective as it gives us a chance to consider and digest what has been said which further enhances …show more content…

Although, ‘rimes embrassées’ is traditionally used for the first eight lines in sonnets, Rimbaud has opted for ‘rimes croisées’ in stanza one, demonstrating his lack of conformity. Moreover, the stanzas could be interpreted as a representation of Venus’ body. As we descend, her body becomes anatomically smaller just as when we descend the stanzas, they too decrease in length. Rimbaud focuses on the backside of Venus which was unconventional as past portrayals tended to focus on her front. Finally his persistent use of semi-colons and caesuras, most noticeably in stanza two, enables him to keep the fluidity of the poem and link it together, demonstrating a more modernist and new style of

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