Rhetorical Analysis Of Bryan Stevenson's Just Mercy '

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BAM! That is a great idea! The judge’s gavel strikes, finalizing his own mother’s sentence to life in prison. This awful affair was a poignant reality for many families residing in Alabama during the late 20th century and into the early years of the 21st. We as a country face a crisis that threatens women, making it far too easy to spontaneously receive a hefty sentence for minor mistakes. Bryan Stevenson, a lawyer in Alabama, was a primary force fighting for these unlucky women. Stevenson wrote the book, Just Mercy, a memoir recapping the cases he pursued. Stevenson was a young law student who took part in justice projects all over the country. He eventually ended up in Alabama to represent the poor, incarcerated, and condemned. The majority …show more content…

One of these cases followed a woman, whose name was not disclosed, who received a preposterous sentence that was not even close to warranted by the “crime” she committed. “She had, in fact, been convicted and sentenced to over ten years in prison for writing five checks, including three to Toys “R” Us. None of the checks were for more than $150. She was not unique”(Stevenson 236). This shows how easily a woman can receive a sentence. If anything, a few overdrawn checks should warrant a fine from the bank, definitely not prison time, especially as long as ten years. This woman being sent to prison impacts her family as well, they are clearly not well off seen as she was scrounging to purchase Christmas gifts. The husband and especially the children would feel the impact of this unjust sentencing just as much, if not more, than the mother would. Stevenson uses this anecdote because the situation it describes is particularly heart wrenching. It causes the reader to feel emotions they otherwise wouldn’t. Another instance of Stevenson using an anecdote is when he refers to Efernia McClendon. McClendon was a black teenager who became pregnant in high school and unsurprisingly hid the pregnancy from her parents. The baby was delivered after just about five months of pregnancy and came into this world as a stillborn. The baby’s remains …show more content…

He thoughtfully chooses words to emphasize certain points. Near the end of the chapter, Colbey was freed and gave a speech at the EJI’s annual benefit. Her speech was heartfelt and touched those who attended, but Stevenson drew special attention to Colbey’s daughter. Stevenson described, “We took pictures with Marsha and some of the staff, and her daughter is in every shot because she refused to let go.”(Stevenson 241). Stevenson makes sure to say that Colbey’s daughter refused to let go, she wasn’t just reluctant, but she refused. This shows the impact that Colbey’s incarceration had on her daughter. She was so desperate to never lose her mother again that she would not let go. Stevenson conveys all of this detail thoughtfully using one word. One word makes all the difference and evokes a different feeling in the reader. He uses diction again in the same instance. In the next paragraph he notes that, “She became emotional only when she talked about the women she’d left behind”(Stevenson 241). This shows Colbey’s remorse for those women still trapped there. She was previously there with them and will be scarred by it for as long as she lives. Stevenson, rather than simply saying that she got emotional when she talked about the people that were still in that prison, says “the women she’d left behind”. This carries more emotional weight and further shows Colbey's empathy for the incarcerated. That careful manner of writing

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