A Paragraph 1 = research question explained / tell a story to introduce topic As a kid I always interested in making my own business. It started going putt putting in hocking hills. The putt place was called Hocking Hills Mini Golf and wasn’t the funnest story on how my dad and I found the place we were heading back from a fernal. On that day we played one round and I got a 36 was the record for the golf course. Aslo i got put into the paper there first page. That made me get into putt putt and made my own putt putt courses. B Paragraph 2 = how will your paper answer this question / ends with thesis statement I wanted to know what it takes to own a business. Like if there is a degree behind it or how to get a business loan. Searching this …show more content…
will make me a better business owner owning else things. How i'm going to find these things is look at business models of other miniature golf places. Aslo examine a bank policies for obtaining a loan. And with my certain business i will want to do is putt putt business. Putt Putt business is a job where you can meet new people and create your own putt putt course your own design. COST 1 Paragraph 3 what cost a lot - physical items needed To start your business it cost a lot of money aspeshaly a putt putt business it costs 250,000 dollars for expense.
If you count all the things you need for a putt putt place. You need a good location, food , good putting greens, parking, themes and all of those things add up to around 250,000 …show more content…
dollars. 2 Paragraph 4 loan - how to obtain I bet you don’t have 250,000 dollars laying around because i know don't and So can always go the way of a business loan. How do you qualify for a business loan? There's five steps. 1. Build personal and business credit scores 2. Know the lender minimum qualification and requirements 3. Gather financial and legal documents 4. develop a strong business plan 5. Provide Collateral. From step one you need to have about a 300 to 850 credit score. Aslo have to pay off any debts you have. Step 2 you need to meet all the loan requirements. That are you have to be 18 or older, an open and active checking account, show proof of income, and have a valid phone number. Step 3 is the application process. That is a Balance sheet, income statement, Personal and business bank statements, A photo of your driver’s license, Commercial leases, Business licenses, Articles of incorporation, A resume that shows relevant management or business experience, Financial projections if you have a limited operating history. Step 4 is a big in my opinion because you did to sell why they should give you this big loan of 250,000 dollars to start you own opinion. Step 5 is Collateral is an asset, such as equipment, real estate or inventory, that can be seized and sold by the lender if you can’t make your payments. It’s basically a way lenders can recover their money if your business fails. Those are the 5 main steps of getting a loan. 3 Paragraph 5 what does it take have putt putt in the name So I went to have putt putt in my name of my business and theres alot of cost that goes into in having that.
So for the start of your business you need to have Mini golf and something like that at first. When it will take while to earn money them your business. So after all the months/years for owning your business to get putt in your name you need to have a good net worth and have alot of mney up front. These are the exact numbers. So if you want to have putt putt in your name with a 36 hole golf course, you need to have a net worth at least $1,000,000 and also with 200,000 cash to invest in the business. It has to be atleast 36 holes. There also other opinins like with games and partys with that you hve to have 36 holes too. You have to have a net worth of $2,000,000 and also with 300,000 cash to invest in the business. DEGREE/TRAINING 1 Paragraph 6 2 year What degree do you need to run your own business? Like for me i don’t like going to school and I looked up that you only need to go to college for 2 years and get a associate’s degree. A associate degree is a two-year post-secondary degree. With this degree you can have a fast time to start your own business. It also is cheaper and you can always go back if you hit any road humps on the way. 2 Paragraph 7 training So training at a putt putt place. Theres actally only one thing and I know that because I called one of my favorite putt putt places to go in Florida called snugglers cove it has live alligators that you
can feed. I talked to one person there and they said that you need to know cpr and one how to run a good putt course and be nice. 3 Paragraph 8 franchise So theres alot going into a putt putt franchise like money, how big you wan it to be. Like alt of guidelines for becoming a franchise. You or your group should meet or exceed the following financial requirements in order to build and operate a successful Putt-Putt course. Like how i said in paragragh 5 be have to alot of money and money put into it. THEMES/LOCATION/FEATURES 1 Paragraph 9 popular themes / features Paragraph 10 geographic locations Now you got to think of the location, like in a sunny place like year around or indoors. How big your golf course wants to be. If you want it in ohio or florida or North Carolina. All of those prices very. Now you got to think of the features and what themes you are going to have. So people can say oh do you know that putt putt places with the waterfalls and or alligators. Gotta make it fun and entertaining. With the themes you got to think of the location to like alligators can only be in certain spots all year round. Like in florida there a priate theme putt putt course with florida one of the best putt putt course ever in my opinin. Theres alot all stuff that goes into think of this. CONCLUSION A Paragraph 12 = restate thesis and main ideas Theres alot of things that go to eith bussiness like cost, what degree and where you want your business. Like i know that I have to start my business as a miniature golf course instead of putt putt because have to have alot money put into this business to have putt putt in your name. This business alot people and familys making them happy and making sure that they have fun. Aslo meeting new people. B Paragraph 13 = why does this matter With think of all of these things I have a better idea on my business. Like this is going to take time and alot of waiting but its worth it becuse ill be making people and family come closer togeter and hace change to give family this business thats what it is about.
The agency I chose to do is the Hillandale golf course, which is located in Durham North Carolina. The reason why I chose to do my project on Hillandale golf course because since the beginning of the semester I have been traveling over to the golf course twice a week for a class learning the rules and the way the game of golf is played. Hillandale golf course is named the “Granddaddy golf course of Durham/ Research Triangle golf”. Hillandale was donated to the Durham area back in 1911 through the philanthropic interests of long-time Durham resident John Sprunt Hill. Donald Ross and Perry Maxwell originally designed the course. Donald Ross had designed the first 9 holes and Perry Maxwell came up with the last 9 holes. Since 1960 over 1.7 million rounds of golf have been played that being an average of 45,000 yearly. This public golf course provides a challenge from each level of players in the game of golf. In 1960, the Hillandale Golf Course was moved to its current location in Durham and was redesigned by George Cobb, who is also the designer of the Surf Club in Myrtle Beach, S.C.
Charles Macdonald was an early founder of American golf. He recalled playing golf in the Chicago area as early as 1875. Another promoter of golf, a young man named Andrew Bell from Burlington, Iowa, was initially exposed to golf when he went to Scotland to attend the University of Edinburgh. Upon his return to the United States in 1883, he laid out four informal golf holes on the family farm and played a few rounds with his friends. In 1884 Colonel Hamilton Gillispie, a former Scotsman who went into the lumber business in Florida, was known to hit golf balls in a field that is now the main street of Sarasota (History of Golf 7). Also in 1884, the Oakhurst Golf Club was formed in North Carolina now famous for it’s first hole from the Club’s Homestead course, celebrated to...
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In the years to come the players would slowly develop rules for the game. Golf began to take shape as the game played today in the 1800’s. “Golf in the first half of the century was still largely an informal game: there was almost no distinction between amateurs and professionals, and matches were set up primarily to bet on, bets made between players and spectators.” (Pearson, History of the Game of Golf) The elitist members of the clubs used these matches to help set up the rules used in today’s game. Peasants were only allowed to play under special circumstances, “The artisans may play on Sunday after raking the bunkers, but they’re not allowed at any time to walk in front of the clubhouse.” (Arscott, Golf: A Very Peculiar History) Other than this the course and golf club was only available to the elite citizens that would spend weekends and holidays playing golf and other
There is no ignoring the great increase in the golfing industry over the past decade. It is becoming the fastest growing sport all over the world. It is already the fastest growing sport in the United States. The game and its uniqueness has caught the eye of many people all over the world and in turn that catches the eye of many businesses that might want to use golf to their advantage by understanding the foreign market and try and relate there business to golf.
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I am interested in knowing more about starting and operating my own business. With what I have seen in the developing world around me, business has become more and more popular, I realized it is a great potential career path for me. So I would like to know, where to start, what schooling is needed, where do I make my business legal, how important is the work environment and gathering employees. Or is some of that afterthought stuff, that only matters if i...
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