Persuasive Essay On Concussions

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Imagine you are on your high school football team and just took the hardest hit of your life. You go to the doctor and he suspects that you will have a major concussion and potential brain damage. That sounds bad, kind of worst case scenario but in reality, this is real life situations for many high schoolers every year because their brains are not even fully developed! This makes you wonder should high contact sports be banned for people under the age of 21? Because of the higher injurie rate for high school football players then there are for older college players? The potential long term effects from high school injuries? Or even the fact that concussions from high contact sports can alter your brain functions.
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As it states in a document posted by The Inquirer written in the words of Gary A. Emmett a professor of Pediatrics and a personal victim of these long term damages “I broke my hand in ninth grade and did not tell anyone for the whole season, so I could continue to play. I got my “my bell rung” (probably mild concussions) at least five times. As long as I could tell two fingers from three fingers, I was put right back into the game.” (Gary). The danger of these sports are real and most of the injures come from high school like his broken hand. even when the sports are not even as intense and fast pace like in college or above. This shows how intense just high school football can be when kids haven’t even experienced life yet. he also states ”I have mild chronic pain and a missing knuckle on my right hand probably from ignoring that broken hand in high school. I developed traumatic arthritis of my cervical spine and needed neck surgery in my late 30s probably because of repetitive trauma from those two sports. My leg joints are very stiff mainly because I’m 67, but probably also from thousands of collisions in my youth.”(Gary) Now many kids would do anything just to play just like he did and that can be costing in the long run just because some kids don’t know the potential cost of a small concussion or broken

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