Narrative Essay: The Trampoline Park

“ Ring! ” went the bell as kids filled the hallway like rain water through a crack. ‘Bailey! Julia! Come here! ” yelled Amber “ My parents are having a big grand opening for the trampoline park tonight and they said I could be the first one to jump into the pit. I wanted to know if you wanted to come and do it with me? ” she asked them as people hit their bulging backpacks while running to their bus. “ Sure! Sounds fun ” Bailey and Julia said at the same time, all giggling. “ Okay be there at seven tonight! ” Amber shouted while running to catch her bus.
When Amber got home her parents were in the kitchen paying some last minute bills for the grand opening. “ Hey sweetie, how was your day? ” her mom said with joy. “ fine I guess ” Amber said

“ I invited Julia and Bailey to the grand opening to jump in the pit with me! ” she blurted running up the stairs so her parents would have no choice to say they couldn't. “ Give it beck John! No it’s mine! ” yelled voices coming from across the hall. Amber knew those were her brothers, John and Jim, probably fighting over another toy again. Barging in to the airplane and lego covered room amber questioned “ Are you two coming to the grand opening tonight? ” immediately her brothers turned and with a smirk on their faces they both said “ Yeah and we are going to be the first ones to jump into the pit with you, and i guess your friends now “. amber hoped they had said no but unfortunately they didn't so she just had to deal with it “ fine, just don't bother my friends and i while we’re there Later that evening the families van pulled into the car park parking lot and Amber run inside to find her friends. When she opened the

They went through the bushes, over water, and as soon and they saw a Snow White House they knew it was hers. they were about to knock on the door a huge puff of fog came and there was the wicked witch “ hello children, I wanted to see you do the deed myself so i'm going to stick around” she said with a cackle. The girls all thought it wasn't right to poison Snow White but they only had thirty minutes left. “ maybe we shouldn't give the apple to Snow White” amber said to the witch “ just because she is called the fairest of them all doesn't mean that she is” the witch's face relaxed and she started to think, maybe amber was right. “ you are beautiful” amber said putting her hand on the witch's boney arm. “ since you set my mind straight I will grant the wish without you having to giver her the apple” the wicked witch said with a smile. And with a flick of hand amber,Julia,Bailey,Jim and John all felt the shock in their body's again telling them they're going