Infusoria Thesis Statement

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My thesis statement is that the world of the worlds is stupid and the text in out-of-date. The structure of this book was set on the year of 1898. One of the languages that is not how we talk is on page four “It is possible that the infusoria under the microscope do the same.” Who use the word infusoria anymore? When you read the book what did you think? When my brain thinks of this book it thinks of “oh my gosh really”. On page seventy-eight the narrator says “ hist” as in a whisper. “Hello it is not hist it is pist not hist”. Really you need to think Mr. H.G. Wells. Then he uses “vast”. What in your right mind would make you put the vast as a word in a book? On the page one-twenty-nine he put “what the devil it is”. Really who would say that my brain even tells me not to say that? You just do not just go outside and say “Hey honey, what devil it is”. What. If you haven’t got my point yet then you should look in a dictionary and …show more content…

H.G. Wells you would probably think that the slang we use now is bad well read your book and then tell me who is worse, (your language or the current language that we use in the United States of America.) How about you take notes on our slang and update you book because what you write is just the wrong way to write. Now do you get my point the Mr. H.G Wells? How many times have you got people tell you this book is bad? On page one-thirty-three, “He uses the word curate”. Question, what does that word curate mean? Personally I am very surprised in book two it is more understanding to my point of view. The second book has so much present tense words for people to understand. when we read the book it just sounded weird and stupid so that is how the students responded. With a type of “uhh this book is going to be horrible”. Me personally thought about taking the words of the book and change them to modern language. On page two-hundred he tries to get us to pay attention to injected. because he puts it in capital and bold

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