How does H.G Wells build suspense in The Red Room?

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How does H.G Wells build suspense in the red room?

H.G. Wells "red room "is a pre-twentieth century suspense short story,

which is a type of a Gothic story. I shall examine the various

techniques that the writer has used to create and sustain suspense.

For the first part of the essay I shall explain what a Gothic story

is.

A Gothic story is a type of romantic fiction that predominated in

English literature in the last third of the 18th century, the setting

to for which was usually a ruined Gothic, Castle or Abbey. The Gothic

novel or Gothic romance, emphasised mystery and horror and was filled

with ghost haunted rooms, underground passages and secret stairways.

For this reason it is told the "red room" is a Gothic story, this

could also explain how suspense in the "red room" was formed.

Also if I look at the genre of the story, suspense is built at the

beginning by H.G. Well's description of the man with the withered arm,

the woman looking into the fire, the second old man and the

description of the house:

"Flags in the passage outside."

"Door creaked on hinges."

Also suspense is built by the description of the room, where the young

man has to spend the night:

"Steps up to it, were in a shadowy corner"

This quote explains what the passage up to the "red room" was like.

The mention of shadows in the description of the surroundings gives a

feeling of evil, unfriendliness and dark unapproachable places. This

also makes you feel on edge.

In the structure of the story we constantly are made to be fearful of

what we will find by the suggestive comment of the woman and the man

with the withered arm. Some examples of the way the old woman and the

man with the withered arm, second old man and ...

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...nd brings tension back into the story. As the reader I know

that the narrator is getting quite nervous:

"A queer high note gets into his voice"

These words were used to describe the darkness as candles were going

out was so accurate. For example:

"Like a ragged storm cloud sweeping out the stairs"

Words used again to describe sudden darkness. The darkness became a:

"Stifling embrace"

too much for him to cope with.

In my opinion H. G. Wells writes a very descriptive story. He manages

throughout to convey a feeling of nervous tension and when he thinks

that things are beginning to relax he introduces another unsettling

point to the story. He keeps you on the edge of your seat and makes

you wonder how the story will turn out. His use of descriptive words:

"Deafens, darkens and overwhelms"

makes the reader see this story in their minds my.

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