Hot Springs Narrative Essay

Narrative Essay One bright early summer morning Kiana and her softball team traveled to Hot Springs, Arkansas. They were making their way to Magic Springs to celebrate winning their back to school all night tournament. They could already tell it was going to be a delightful day, all the girls were so thrilled to get on the rides and spend their day at Magic Springs, until something unexpected happened. The first thing they did was go stand in line while their coach, Coach Phillip went and got their tickets. Everyone got their tickets passed around and headed on in, all together they lined up in front to take a absurd group picture. The girls partnered up together in pairs of two or threes. Kiana was in a group with Lily, Nya and Cali. The first ride they went on was The X-Coaster, everyone had been on that ride before and were really excited. After that they went on a couple more rides, and then they decided to go swimming. After they were done swimming, they all decided they were hungry. They made their way out the pool and up to the food area, as they walked into a great smelling Pizza Shop, BOOM! Doors slammed loudly behind the four girls, causing them all to scream.

They were full with confusion but not much fear. They all got out their phones and started to try and contact their parents and coaches, none of their phones worked. After a few mins of being trapped, a man and a woman came out in all white. They had blood on their shirts, which frightened the girls. The man and woman started to walk towards the girls and so the girls back peddled, they were very shaken up at this moment. The people told them they’d hope they had a good last day. They snatched each girl up one by one and threw them in a thirty-two below freezer, they told them to sit tight and don’t move until the truck came to pick them